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Hey, readers! I'm a reader and a writer. That's how I see myself, at least. I love to read and I love to write. It's always been a part of me. I've been writing stories since before I can remember.
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That was interesting? A next chapter please?
11131027
Hmm, I'll think on that. I really only intended to write a one-shot but maybe. Thanks for reading though.
Does this fetish have a name?
11131990
Don't know, I didn't think of it till a few days ago.
This was a very interesting take.
I can't really put into words precisely why I enjoyed it, but I will say that you really made me feel Aria's finger fixation, so much so that I started to worry that I may develop one myself. It's such a fascinating fetish, one that I don't think I've seen before, at least not in this form. Very well done, my friend.
I will say, the writing, perspective, pacing, all of that is a bit all over the place. You change perspective and tense on more than one occasion, and some of the internal logic of the story doesn't exactly work (Aria mocks Adagio and Sonata for being sluts, but she herself is a horny weirdo. That could be interpreted as Aria being a hypocrite, but it feels more like an inconsistency to me, personally).
Simply fascinating, and I quite enjoyed. Good job, and thank you for your submission!
11184899
Yeah, my perspective changed constantly and it wasn't graceful. I wanted to experiment with putting a voice in the third person instead of having it take place through a POV exclusively and I think in the end it just served to confuse me and the reader. Having written nothing but scripts for years, has affected my sense of pacing without the ability to stage it. Thus my timing and pace tend not to translate. The briefness of the fic came more out of my "finish" mentality and suffice it to say, I don't disagree with what you're saying. The Aria calling them sluts was definitely hypocritical but purposeful, but a sense of irony needs more clarity. My whole thing was I wanted Aria to loathe the situation she found herself in, and that her lust was thrust upon her and not purposefully sought out and her perversion wasn't apparent to her before coming to the human world. The thought was she already had these opinions of Sonata and Adagio before her fixation which, yes would make her seem a hypocrite. I had hoped the fact that she was portrayed as a virgin would illustrate this. But, you know, writing... *Pblt* Concept is my strength. Now if only I could do words.
My shortcomings withstanding make me really appreciate that you checked it out.
There was a whole bunch of ideas about toes and feet, gloves and clothes but a second chapter wasn't in the stars for me. I don't find much time for writing these days but I've always loved your fiction and so the contest caught my eye. Fics like The Handmaiden and Scrambled Egghead are essential reads. Your particular brand of eroticism is top-notch. Big fan. Thanks for reading!
11185295
I commend you for trying something new, and something I don't expect to see from anyone else. I can appreciate your attempt at Aria's complex situation, and I don't want to give the impression that you were totally unsuccessful. As I said, I could tell that you were going for a bit of frustrated hypocrisy. It's a pretty difficult thing to pull off, having to toe the line between obvious irony for the reader to understand but not beating them over the head with it.
If you ever change your mind and decide to write more about Aria's digit fixation, I hope you remember to PM me that shit right away. I'd love to give it a look, and maybe even help you work it out if you want/need.
Keep on rockin', uce.
Did you ever read a story and say to yourself, "I'm not sure if that was good, but I had fun reading it?"
Yeah, Aria isn't the only person kind of conflicted and confused here.
Thank you for an entertaining time that I enjoyed.
11194224
I'm glad you enjoyed it, I've got a second chapter in the slow cooker. Thanks for reading!