Why isn't this story rated M?

A familiar voice screamed in the darkness as the lights danced back and forth. A shadow of a man stood lingering before a small girl, his axe bloodied and rot. Crimson red covered the wooden floors as large walls towered over the helpless girl. She was cornered, the man approaching with a wicked laugh. It was familiar, all to familiar.

What was that?

Shaking her head and starting the path to her locket, the farmer slipped by many students hoping to be as invisible as possible. Racing through the halls to get the food from her locker AJ eventually found herself in the correct hall. However, students crowded her locker and laughed. Something was happening, once one of the students spotted the confused farmer they pulled out their phone and started to record. Pushing past the masses AJ eventually approached her locker. Marker was painted upon the locker saying many words, some slurs, some insults. Names like “redneck” or “country hick” crowded the small blue space of her locker. Many kids fled when they saw her, however some remained. Phones all pointed towards the farmer she panicked, a swell of pain and confusion echoing her mind making it numb.

I’m surprised she hasn’t lost it.

The rest of the day went… OK. Some more stares, more visits to the locker. She even ran into Rarity at some point, that ended horribly. The fashionesta picked fun of the blondes clothes as others laughed behind her. It was weird to see this side of the fashionesta, but eventually Applejack got over it. Everything was gonna be OK by the end of the tunnel, right? Just had to keep moving… like Cryptic said.

Cryptic is probably the reason applejack hasn’t snapped. I hope we see more of her.

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Its mostly only swears and death thats gonna be bad, nothing I personally see that should make it rated M. Sorry.

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This:

"A familiar voice screamed in the darkness as the lights danced back and forth. A shadow of a man stood lingering before a small girl, his axe bloodied and rot. Crimson red covered the wooden floors as large walls towered over the helpless girl. She was cornered, the man approaching with a wicked laugh. It was familiar, all to familiar. "

And this from the start of the book:

"Echoes of voices sang around the empty hall. Lights flickered on and off as a smile deepened in the dark, an all too familiar smile. 
   A scream sounded out as the air grew thick with the smell of blood. Chains dangled on the floor as heavy footsteps followed. He was here, and damn was he hungry."

Are related in a way to the story itself. In short its a small mystery to solve. HINT: they both take place in the same scene.

Good luck! :D

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Oh ok