Okay one thing that I noticed that doesn't make any sense is that Applejack is 17 in this story, sunset waking up the friendship happened either freshman South Mall or junior year , a 17 year old is not in any of those grades a 17 year old is a senior Applejack would be 14 15 or 16
"Tragedy", not "Tragity".
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I'm sorry, thank you for the feedback!
I don't know how dark this will be, but I want to read more to see where this fic is heading for some reason.
So, this is set before the first EQG film, right?
P.S. I thought the word 'Tragity' was an intentional misspelling on your part.
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It is indeed set before the first movie but after the Sunset friendship breaking texts, also no i just spelled it wrong.
I'm excited that you want to read more thou! That makes my day!
Wow, if this is what sunset shimmer caused, then I’m surprised she was so willing to give her a second chance.
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You will see why they forgave her in a later chapter, but its gonna get worse from here.
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Does her forgiving sunset have something to do with her parents?
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*Shrug*
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It was worth a shot to ask.
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I submitted the chapter to early, LOL. I strongly apologise- i hope you liked the sneak peak thou!
Then again nothing will really change in the chapter- just checking for spelling errors and other with a friend.
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I must ask, did you unpublish your chapter?
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I did because i forgot to check for spelling errors- it should be out later today.
Okay one thing that I noticed that doesn't make any sense is that Applejack is 17 in this story, sunset waking up the friendship happened either freshman South Mall or junior year , a 17 year old is not in any of those grades a 17 year old is a senior Applejack would be 14 15 or 16