Lime wants to go to many places when he grows up.Later in the future he meets friends.But one simple dare may put hundreds of lives on the risk.
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MuffinTheWriter999
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Hey there! One quick word of advice:
NEWCOMER
NOT NEWCOMMER
Please spell your title right. Also put spaces after a period. If you don't pay attention to your title and description it does not bode well for the story itself.
Quick bit of advice #2!
PUT A SPACE AFTER EACH PERIOD
Umm, I'm not sure if I can help you. You need to read this.
Seriously, it is extremely helpful to someone (so obviously) starting out. I'm not going to bother giving you huge amounts of advice, please just read it.
Quick advice #3
At least 1000 words per chapter
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Not necessarily. This is the exception to the rule.
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My point exactly, Sooner or later you'll have 30 chapters of 200 - 700 words long.
I will edit these out soon.
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By the exception to the rule, I mean the story is expertly written. Each chapter serves a purpose, and each chapter has meaning in of itself.
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Thank you
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I was referring to the link I posted. I'm sorry for the confusion...
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Its fine for the misconception
I have made a few changes and added a paragraph and started a new chapter.youre welcome!.