• Member Since 4th Sep, 2012
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Thinkerten


My name is Thinkerten, and I am a male unicorn from Stalliongrad, and I am here to keep up on the news of equestria.

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After the defeat of the Changelings in Canterlot, They were blown south, landing in the city of Stalliongrad. They are only seen by one observant student of magic. Thinkerten, no one believes him though, not even his professor. He writes to Princess Celestia for help. But will she just think he's crazy too?
This story is still not complete, and undergoing heavy editing, please, feel free to make suggestions!

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 6 )

Good job with this. I give you my everything.

Ugh chapter 1 and 2 is same stuff ?
Need a lot of editing. And action is soo fucking unreal like that fast change of Luna just erm even if i was Chrysalis i don't belive it.

... a wall of text, really?
Also your story moves much too quickly, pace it. Along with numerous plotholes, including how the princess immediately believes this random letter from a random stallion.

That's as far as I got before I began laughing to hard to read. In a word, terrible.

It has that same title as....:raritycry:

OF COURSE IT HAS A SHITTY WALL OF TEXT!!!!

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