122699 Thanks for the input, I'll get around to editing it. I'm also working on the cover art, along with school, so changes may take time.

Ok. so i've been reading some of the comments on your story and, well some of them speak the truth.u first, you definitely need an editor to get rid of that wall of text, it just dosent look very good and definitely needs something done with it. Also the title my need to be change due to another fanfic sharing it, in witch is written by a popular writer. even though that might be hard to change it should not be too hard.