With the status quo of Equestria hanging in the balance, the celestial bodies out of control and both Princesses out of the picture it comes to Twilight to maintain the order and try to save as many ponies as she can, it won't be easy and she will need the help of a newcomer one that says to be someone that makes bad dreams go away. Can Twilight trust her? And what does she means with a Demon in Equestria?
"So... Does this mean you got the day off?" asked Spike, while pulling back his spikes with sticky dragon spit.
"Don't compete with my job, Spike." replied Raven "You'll never win."
(Sorry... Could not resist hahahaxD)
Overall a nice, enjoyable, fanfic
Not gonna lie tho... Since I'm not a LOL fan most of the second half with Lillia is a big "meh" to me...
Did love everything else tho
Specially the interaction between worried Raven and Twilight at the end!
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Thank you for that, I'm sorry you couldn't enjoy the fight because if a lack of info though, I will keep it in mind for the next one so to not alienate anyone else in the future, thanks you
Hey man, glad to see you again posting stuff! Also, this was a great story! I was glad to read this, can’t wait to see you post anything more in the future!
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Happy to know that my friend, yes it was a big hiatus wasn't it?
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Sure was !
Hey Firefoxino, your story has been reviewed here!