Does anyone besides me notice that in Episode 17 Season 2 there are barely any clips with the main six? Here's what the main six were doing during that episode!!!
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*Fluttershy
Let me give you some advice.
I think you should read some more stories on the site. Look at how they describe things as they go along. This story didn't have much description, it lacked a personality and Fluttershy got way OOC.
It doesn't seem like you tried either. Try again when you have more experience under your hooves.
Wha-What the
naturally I can't see why so many people are constantly making fluttermac stories not that their bad are anything it's just how are they compatible in anyway, but your story not to be rude but it could use some more work you have fluttershy's personality completely off watch some other stories and pay attention to the episodes if you watch them.
1240104 Explain why it's wrong? It's my first story and I know its needs work.
1240799 I only named myself that because Fluttershy was taken.
1240104Double that.
1240564 I read your whole message. I get it. But please don't tell me how to write.
And thanks for the constructive criticism.
1240799 well that's just rude
love and tolerance. I'm not a Flutterdash fan (at all) but that's no reason to be hating
1250588 I repeat, that's just rude
On the whole I liked this story. I mean it has a lot more potential chilling in the backseat, but what story doesn't? I love the way you use the whole diary story angle but you must keep in mind about who exactly is writing it. Big Macintosh's final line "next year" was an amazing touch, and the whole thing with Angel was hilarious :3 keep up the good work.
1259923 Thanks!!!
1260331 and hey, don't let hatred get ya down because of your profile name, or if they don't like your tic. Hatrers are just gonna hate
1240799
Maybe you should've just left the fic alone.
Aw... That's so sweet!
Also, you might want to fix a couple of errors. For example:
Sweetie Belle, Apple Bloom, and Berry Punch are supposed to be two-word names.
https://youtu.be/PlQr4d8nnq4