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Join Octavia Philharmonica Da Canterlot on her adventures through IstanBull, as she tries to uncover the secrets of Luna's Library. She meets fellow assassins to aid her on her quest, while the templar army grows.

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first like, first favourite

Also, this is pretty good, maybe paragraph this up some moar?

1224156 thank you! It's hard to write this because I wrote the first chapters on an iPod. It takes forever.:pinkiecrazy:

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This is an unreadable wall of text. Use paragraph breaks, please.

1224709 thanks for the Friendly criticism! I am writing some of this on an iPod, so I can't tell when there should be a paragraph. :derpytongue2: I will try to fix it up when I get to a computer.:twilightblush:

1225592 Do those emoticons mean your being sarcasitic?:rainbowhuh:

You are boss bro will you give me more :rainbowwild:

man i like the way you write can you do me a favor and put deathsroke in it he is the guy in my porfile :twilightsheepish:

1236753 Thanks! How could I integrate Deathstroke into this? :unsuresweetie:

i love you man not in a bad way

i love you man not in a bad way make deathstroke kill somne gaurds and he kills octava

1275605 Thanks, but um... No...:unsuresweetie: I am not putting Deathstroke into an assassins creed story. sorry.:twilightsheepish:

sorry but when will we have a new chapter:raritydespair:

This is a good story, but it seems kinda out of character for Octavia. Isn't she supposed to be refined and classy? It doesn't seem like she'd be the type to kill, even if she was an assassin. Good Story though, I hope to see more.

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