One day, Luna finds a note that was left for her and Celestia by their mother, Queen Galaxia. The note mentions a hidden room, underground somewhere in Equestria, that is full of ancient valuable artifacts that were traded, crafted and stolen during times of war when Galaxia was a filly. These valuables are possibly worth more than anyone could ever imagine. The two sisters decide to task Flurry Heart, Neighsay, and the Young Six with finding this legendary treasure and bringing it above ground.
Chapters (10)
A note on why the Pillars weren't summoned, considering
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"While summoning the PIllars themselves would solve finding the vault, they had scattered to explore current-day Equestria (and maybe the wider world, even Stygian had left to explore) and Starswirl was always hard to reach when on his sabbaticals."
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I've edited the chapter to explain why the pillars weren't summoned. I forgot to make this change before submitting.
The idea has potential...but you skipped out on a LOT of opportunities for Neighsay to bond with the Young Six OR with Flurry. It's like putting someone on a team but they just keep to themselves, not really bonding with the team. Plus...I was expecting something with more effort. 3,500 words altogether does not an adventure make. You may want to work on building scenes on relationships and friendships with the characters.
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I'm in the process of getting that written. I've done Ocellus and Yona already, but I am going on vacation with my family tomorrow. I will get that finished soon after I return home. That's a promise.
I’m afraid I feel disappointed in this story.
This story had a lot of potential, but it was too short, and could’ve gone on longer
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Good grief