"I am not proud, but I am happy; and happiness blinds, I think, more than pride." | Pronouns
Twilight Velvet doesn't get to see her daughter much, so she's ecstatic when she's invited to Ponyville during a school holiday. While there, she runs into Mistmane, one of the fabled heroes she's heard so much about. Velvet was expecting an intimidating presence, full of splendor and awe-inspiring, but finds herself feeling a bit differently.
Written for Nailah's Shipping Contest.
Cover art by ProBaldr.
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Only problem I see with this is Nightlight
Unless this addressed that and I missed it.
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It's mentioned that Twilight Velvet and Night Light split up. But looking back, I can admit that segment was a bit short.
So yeah. Addressed, but somewhat unsatisfactorily. That bit might be the fatal flaw here. But live and learn, right?
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So long as it was addressed that's good enough for me.
Good job on this one.
Well, that’s unexpected.
Wow, you certainly got a tough pairing, haha! Well done though, this fic was very nice