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My Little Pony Renaissance Contest39 stories ·113 members

Home sweet home?

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Octavia Melody is taking a big step in her life and she is very unsure about her future. Well, on her way to meet her new roommate, she runs into a mysterious pony who gives her hope.

Chapters (6)

Chapter 1: The list · 29th Jul 2021 · 706 words
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Chapter 2: Encounters · 29th Jul 2021 · 1,124 words
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Chapter 3: Tea · 29th Jul 2021 · 1,514 words
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Chapter 4: Family · 29th Jul 2021 · 1,455 words
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Chapter 5: Is change good? · 29th Jul 2021 · 1,000 words
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Epilogue · 29th Jul 2021 · 790 words
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ShadowblazeCR #1 · Jul 30th, 2021 · 1 · · Epilogue ·

This was good. Came 'cause of the cover art if I'm going to be honest. But the creation of the universe and its content in such a short amount of words, especially to play around with them for so little chapters as well as they came together gave me a good read. I'd recommend to keep thoughts that your characters have in italics, having them in quotes can cause for confusion. Otherwise, I have to say I wouldn't mind some more of whatever universe you've come up with here. Even with the no-go of OctaScratch, I still like the way you've written everyone here. Keep it up.

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