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Bronycommander


A German who likes history, and WW2 technology but not war. "Within the darkness there is light and hope"

Comments ( 23 )

awesome story mate keep it up cant wait for the next story:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Nice to see another fic with Midnight and Moonlight.

Really good! Nice to see how Jessie and Candy bonded over the course of his visit.

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GLad you enjoyed it and surprised to see you here

"Ah, you're woken up."

Correction is you've.

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Auto correction but hope you liked the story

“There is no need to fear, please, calm down.” She raised a handin a calming gesture. “You appeared in a bright light in front of me. How is your name?”

For the first underline, did you mean hoof? And the second one, it should be replaced with what.

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give its anththo, they have hands, not hooves

“Shh, calm down, I am here for you.” Now, it was his turn to comfort her, wrapping his arms around her. “You are truly a polite and handsome mare, something I do appreciate very much.” He spoke in a calming voice, looking her into the eyes.

Did you mean beautiful?

I've just finished reading this, and it's so sweet! I love it how Candy and Jessie got a happy ever after.

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handsome, beautiful, ain't that more or less the same?
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glad to hear it

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Handsome is for used for boys, while beautiful is used for girls.

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oh, okay, never knew that
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apprechiated

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