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Peace Petal


I'm a botanist from Zephyr Heights. I play trumpet in a jazz band, I like flying, and I love God. I'm also vegan and asexual.

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The Pie siblings were some of the most interesting and underused characters in G4, in my opinion. I particularly wanted to do a story focused on Limestone, the most underrated and forgotten of the Pie siblings. "The Pie siblings help Pinkamena" is an alternate take on "Yakity Sax" where the Pie siblings come to Yakyakistan to help cheer up Pinkamena. I also included Octavio Pie, because he's fabulous, but other than that, the story could fall within the world of MLP:FiM. It's not really connected to Pony Life. The story is appropriate for all ages; there is no sexual content, swearing, or violence. It does, however, touch on dark themes about depression, so use some discretion. But if you can watch MLP:FiM, you'll be fine reading "The Pie siblings help Pinkamena."

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“Her friends asked her to stop, and she did,” Maud said. “But she said her life had lost all meaning without the yovidophone. She went to Yakyakistan to listen to the masters play, hoping she could find some semblance of happiness.”

You know if she wanted to play that instrument so badly she could have just asked yona since she lives in Ponyville with her friends maybe she could have gave her some points of view how to play that instrument that was like a huge missed opportunity to ask Yona

“Wait, are we all going?” Octavio said. “I’m certain we should try to cheer up Pinkie, but maybe I shouldn’t go. She’s never happy to see me. I’ll just make things worse.”

Well after what we saw in Pony life they did not have a good relationship with each other and it didn't help that he has a really bad attitude but they saw the forgive each other after a little fight

“Oh, I am,” Octavio said somberly, looking out the window. “Neither snow nor rain can stop us. I will climb any mountain, face any danger, to help Pinkie. We may walk until our hooves are worn, but I will not relent. We may face unknown horrors in the unexplored north, but I will face it all for Pinkie! Know what I mean?” he added brightly, turning to Limestone.

So he knows how to break the fourth wall as well just like her sister lol 😆 ok cool

“I’m just contemplating,” Pinkamena said. “This drop seems high enough to kill a pony. But the rules of physics never seemed to apply to me.”

WHAT!?!? PINKIE PIE NO KILLING YOURSELF IS NOT THE ANSWER 😢

Wow this was a pretty good story of seeing the pie family mostly the siblings going on a journey to find Pinkie Pie to cheer her up and I do like how you added Octavio pie from pony life in the mix with mlpfim and it's pretty sweet that all the pie family came together just to cheer up Pinkie Pie and again Pinkie Pie could have just as yona to teach her how to play the instrument but this is better nothing is better than hearing from your family to support you and how much they appreciate it Pinkie Pie this was a pretty good story keep up the good work

Just to give you a heads up maybe you should put a alternate universe tag on it

well done i liked this story very much! it really kept me hooked start to finish. very touching.

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