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The Amazing Adventures of Spike

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TheScottishbroneyforlife

TheScottishbroneyforlife #1 · Apr 12th, 2021 · · · Spike Encounters Athiests ·

Keep up the good work and I see that you are new

RDT

RDT #2 · Apr 12th, 2021 · · · Spike Meets The Beatles ·

Wherever he trot

trotted

Otherwise, it's technically pretty good.

EDIT: Sorry, I missed a few things.

doing" John

and

nose." Spike said

These need commas before the closing quotation mark.

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