So, why is she like that? No one in Ponyville knows, they just know she's like that. Who does know about her faults? Was it some kind of accident?
No, she's just special. She's different from every other pony in Ponyville.
This story talks about her parents, what they felt after she was born, and, most importantly, why she's special.
You are definitely special, Ditzy Doo.
((This story is really short, but it was just something I had to write, since the idea was pretty good.
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AWWWWWWWWW nice
Just one error.
this one was a mare, a white stallion with a yellow,
mare, a white stallion,
So...she's both?
1315654 Yes, she is (?)
Actually no, that's fixed right now, thank you for pointing it out.
1317251 Called it.
I have a complaint, Can you replace "treating" with "treatment"? It's a little confusing. Other then that, It's kind of cute. I liked it.
1378168 Alright, done. Thanks for the comment!
I love the idea and the short storyline.
I also love the characters and the quick descriptions that a short story like this one demands.
Yet, I couldn't help but think that a lot of things could have been worded better, and I picked up on a couple of mistakes.
Would you mind if I edited for you?
I just wanna fix a few mistakes.
Like "...If you teached her well..."
No offense, but I wanted to punch my screen.
It's fine if you don't, in which case I recommend you just run through and fix it up a bit.
PM me if you do, I got plenty of time on my hands!
Again, I think you did a great job with this idea.
You deserve these: