• Member Since 22nd Mar, 2021
  • offline last seen Jul 4th, 2021

Kaiser Trinity


I am Emperor Trinity. I love writing stories and movies. May good times lie ahead...

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Times are changing. And something said today might be your death tomorrow.
So what is more important? Stay your ground and fight for the nation...
or open your eyes and see the lies behind the war...

My very first story her. I hope you enjoy it.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 1 )

Wow.
That's quite a story.

If you want any suggestions, try to split it into smaller chapters (personally I recommend between 2500 and 4000 words each).
Nearly 10000 at once might scare some potential readers away.
That would also allow you to post them over an extended period of time, like one chapter each day. That helps to keep the audience interested.

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