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Damn, looks like Gilda may have just about shot first.
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At least there shouldn't be reviewed versions.
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Where can I read that and will it be satisfing punishment?
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The story is only outlined yet. It will be written eventually, once I'm done with Piece of Parchment and it will be called The Last Great War.
Star Swirl will gather a cohort from the Fourth Battlehorn Legion (think of them as giant unicorns trained in combat magic and melee combat inspired by roman legionaries after the Marian Reforms) and he will find the ones responsible. Celestia will have them crucified. Trust me... She hates rapists.
I shouldn't make claims as I'm starting as a writer here, but bad people get punished in my stories.
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and like that you have my full attention and yes I cannot wait for this one
I'm still waiting for the celestia moment when shes like "Why does everyone think I'm that bad!? i literally go out of my way to make everyone happy! D:<"
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i can only imagine her shock and rage when she finds out some of them were foals.
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I won't spoil this story for you. This is about the overarching story of the AU. While Celestia has done some bad things in the past, it was out of her inexperience and her own hurt feelings, and in the present she is every bit the Guardian of Harmony. It kinda sucks that I'm talking about stories that aren't written yet, but I know exactly what will be in them, since they are outlined.
Since this chapter bothered you (it is certainly a good thing that you didn't like what happened), I'll share a secret with you.
I put that scene there precisely because Celestia would be furious. Before she became the Princess, she suffered because of a particularly evil unicorn that was the regent of the small city she was born. That guy ended up eating a bowl of broken glass.
Another story you might want to keep an eye out for is The Four Princess of Shatterhoof Valley. It's about a small province that survived an event that destroyed the pony republic due to Discord and the local governor fancied himself king. A nasty one, with some nasty sons. Celestia and Luna really mess them up in that story, even if it will be written from the princes' point of view and she can come out as the villain, but that is my 'evil' Celestia... She messes up bad people.
She was my favorite character in the cartoon... I can't make Celestia bad.
The whole story in Fólkvangr is complicated and the overarching story in the AU is a bit convoluted. There is a lot to be uncovered in the overall story. But...
The end of it all, when the whole political situation and the truth about the past are sorted out, Good prevails.
You know, given this scene, and the post I made for last chapter, I am just a little curious about how the Harpy would handle seeing these:
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I could see it making everyone's day if Sparkly Chew had started digging into the griffonchow, too!
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I'm pretty sure that Cadance is actually Chrysalis. It's the green eye. The big give away of changeling magic.
They don't seem to have incisive or molar teeth. They probably swallow food whole. I mean, Nightmare Moon stinging foals with a neurotoxic poison and then swallowing them whole is a pretty awesome concept for a terror story that you just fed me. Altough, they are also equines and they have their crushing teeth in the back, so maybe they can chew. (I mean, that was my ide for Chrysalis chewing that fungus in the dinner in PoP. At the same time, I love how Cadie/Chrissy's mouth resembles that of a snake.
But that is my opinion. The Harpy would probably want to put them in zoo, or shriek and call a crusade on them. Depends on how PoP goes.
As for Sparkly Chew... I almost did that, just for shits and giggles after that conversation about diets. But I decided against in the end. More than anything, it's also a cultural thing in the story. Southerner griffons don't like too much meat because of the ponies, and tend to prefer lighter meats.
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According to the artist who did the Cadance picture, that was supposed to be the real Cadance after Chrysalis was ejected from Canterlot, where Cadance fooled them all into thinking she was the nice one. BTW, I got those pictures from a post made on the story Diomedes. I read it and the Mares of Diomedes years ago, the first one being notable as it features a
meeting(meating?) between Celestia and a griffon ambassador--where HE ended up as dinner.It got me to thinking you should do an omake where the Harpy discovers that, when stressed, the ponies can suddenly become superpredators--oh, hell--forget the Harpy! I WANT TO SEE CHOCOLATE VELVET'S REACTION!
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Chocolate: Wait! So, bacon is cool then? Awesome!
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Oh, YES, PLEASE!!!
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There's a spin off for PoP coming up that would benefit with a scene like that.
if grunhilda is a nartani, then what is gilda?
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Gilda is a shaddani.
Poor Sparkly Chew.