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That was a good chapter.
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Thank you. The next part is likely to be even better.
Wow, Tempest working with creepy parasite griffons, she has fallen far.
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"It's complicated."
Oooh love it when a narrow, protagonist focused narrative provides glimpses of a larger story going on in the background!
Just who was that raven griffon turned traitor, and why did she seem so apologetic to Gilda after literally running her through? Who on earth was that unicorn with the fox mask, and why did she set off so many alarm bells from Gilda's past selves? Just how any times is the Harpy going to let Gilda cheat death like this? Again not asking for spoilers, just appreciate a story that gradually drops lore bits in while still keeping most of the big plot points hidden!
As an aside, really digging the way you write eldritch horror, definitely has a very visceral and otherworldly feel to it!
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This location is like the one with the roc's nest. It has a whole dungeon waiting to be explored in a sequel and a story of the fall of the Astrani. The Windigos were going to show hints at Gilda, but I decided the whole thing deserved a story of its own, eventually.
About the masked unicorn, you have to think back to the ponies that tried to capture Gilda and Grunhilda while they were on their way from Canterlot to Ponyville. Those two, and the unicorn worked for Tempest Shadow, and that is why she wants revenge.