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TheAlienBrony22


I write Ben 10 and MLP Content most of the time, so you know what you're getting into when you follow me, at least.

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More than a little amateurish, but there's a lot of promise. Keep up the good work buddy!

Ben 10 x MLP: FiM.
OCs included
Altered story (minor and major plot points altered for convenience)
added 3 new elements of harmony
Will definitely experiment with different character interactions, see what sticks.

The cover for the story, you can find on my DeviantArt page, follow the link.

Took immediate liberty to add three new elements. Read on to find out what they could be.

That's nice, but what's actually going to happen in this story?

Comment posted by TheAlienBrony22 deleted Apr 22nd, 2021

*Rub my eyes* did you read the F.A.Q? I see your story have basic problem like..

AJ: howdy Twilight
Twilight : hi Applejack

Should be:

AJ: howdy Twilight

Twilight: Hi Applejack

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Yeah, that tends to be a recurring issue in my writing. I'm just used to writing a certain way. I'll try to fix this issue in the next chapter.

Wouldn't it make more sense to call him Everchanging Spectacle?

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You would be right, since he'd always be changing from his pony form to other forms, but I figured I'd keep the name a little short, if that makes sense.

EDIT: It's not like it matters, I'm essentially rebooting/rewriting this story, but I'm keeping the original up so others can still read it.

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