FiM 10: Friendship is Galactic

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Crack-Fic Casey

Crack-Fic Casey #1 · Mar 10th, 2021 · 1 · · 1. Rough Day, but as expected ·

More than a little amateurish, but there's a lot of promise. Keep up the good work buddy!

Starlight Nova

Starlight Nova #2 · Mar 12th, 2021 · 2 · · 3. Formal introductions and Decimation ·

Ben 10 x MLP: FiM.
OCs included
Altered story (minor and major plot points altered for convenience)
added 3 new elements of harmony
Will definitely experiment with different character interactions, see what sticks.
The cover for the story, you can find on my DeviantArt page, follow the link.
Took immediate liberty to add three new elements. Read on to find out what they could be.

That's nice, but what's actually going to happen in this story?

Comment posted by TheAlienBrony22 deleted Apr 22nd, 2021

Dragon Shimmer

Dragon Shimmer #4 · May 26th, 2021 · 1 · · 12. Council of Artemis Part 4 ·

*Rub my eyes* did you read the F.A.Q? I see your story have basic problem like..

AJ: howdy Twilight
Twilight : hi Applejack

Should be:

AJ: howdy Twilight

Twilight: Hi Applejack

TheAlienBrony22

TheAlienBrony22 #5 · May 26th, 2021 · · · 12. Council of Artemis Part 4 ·

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Yeah, that tends to be a recurring issue in my writing. I'm just used to writing a certain way. I'll try to fix this issue in the next chapter.

Starlight Nova

Starlight Nova #6 · Apr 24th, 2022 · · · 16. A Time to Reflect and Observe ·

Wouldn't it make more sense to call him Everchanging Spectacle?

TheAlienBrony22

TheAlienBrony22 #7 · Apr 24th, 2022 · · · 16. A Time to Reflect and Observe ·

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You would be right, since he'd always be changing from his pony form to other forms, but I figured I'd keep the name a little short, if that makes sense.

EDIT: It's not like it matters, I'm essentially rebooting/rewriting this story, but I'm keeping the original up so others can still read it.

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