i build lego mostly, fanfic writer noob.
An accident has happened dash has no memory prior to or after the accident. Until an old enemy comes and tricks her into darkness, discord, together, they have become a force to be reckoned with, causing chaos to ponies, and humans alike.
This is my first fanfic, in an alternate universe were the only alternative is war. A war brought to humans and will have four of the mane six, dead.
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wow
..................ummm dude i liked the story but.............first off she kills applejack with a pistol now i know lots of stories that use guns but i felt this was to fast a place with minimal technology(except the hospital, i understand that)
second the mane 4(because whats left of the them) didnt feel any remorse for AJ. they just completely threw aside. not even so much as them tearing over it.
but i will say your story its good and if this is your style. well then i should really learn to like other stories. but back to the point nice story
nice story
lol wow
It's shit.
I like it. :3 . I think that you should make it a bit less human related though. Like: "Dash went into cardiac arrest." This is not dissing you. This is giving you a little nudge in the right direction. I really do love the idea. <3