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AmethystMajesty25


I’m an autistic boy who dreams to be a creative writer and loves wrestling, cartoons, anime, and video games.

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The Turtles, Rainbooms, and their allies saved their universe many times. However, they’re not going to save their universe this time around, it’s the Young Ninjas turn and they’re going to save the Music and Arts Program of CHS due to the school’s low budget. The only way to earn big money is to participate a martial arts tournament that is held in CHS. But standing in the Young Ninjas’ way is the undefeated dojo known as Viper Kai. Can they overcome this undefeated karate dojo and earn the cash prize to save CHS?

The story is inspired by Cobra Kai and The Karate Kid movies

Quotes created by me and Jebens1

Logo created by yours truly. :rainbowdetermined2:

Disclaimer: Neither Jeb, or I own Equestria Girls, Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles (2012) or Cobra Kai.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 61 )

I’m still not sure about this fic, but it is good start

Looks like an interesting opening

Question? WHY is it ALWAYS the Arts and Music Classes/Programs that gets the "Low Budgets" in the High Schools??!!


Because, I seen it's one of the main problems that you have to solve IF your a Student/Teacher in the School. By going to some competition to earn the Big Cash in MANY Movies or even some Fanfiction that I have watched/Read.

It sounds a little cliche to me. No Offense.

Also, I didn't like what Cheerilee did to Sunset back their. Sure, she didn't see what really happened. And is obviously tricked by Shark pretending to be the "Nice Guy".


But the main problem is Cheerliee KNEW Sunset, and that Sunset doesn't try to hurt students for No Apparent Reason.


Plus, Cheerliee also knew Sunset is a full fledged Hero with her friends ( Rainbooms, TMNT, and their Allies), so she should knew Sunset is not acting in her Bully Self anymore. But, NNOOO!!!! She is obviously defending the stereotypical Bully ( Shark and his "Friends"). 🙄

I hope that when the CHS FINALLY learn the True Bully Colors of Shark and his Crew, along with their Violent Sensei and Dojo in the Competition.

Cheerilee ( and possibly some others) should make a Huge Apology for not taking Sunset's side of the story in the beginning. :twilightangry2:

Or Else! :pinkiecrazy:

Cheerilee: 😰

Also, who is Lancer and the Rock N' Beats? Are they also your OC's that are like the "Male Versions" of the Rainboom's own Rock Band?


As for the other Characters like Shark. I do get it that he is inspired by the Mohawk Haired Guy who is ironically nickname: Hawk. I hope he can be reformed like him. And Apologize to Lancer, Sunset, the Rainbooms, and ESPECIALLY the TMNT and their Allies ( for his sake) for being a massive jerk and bully.

While, the Viper Kai Sensei/Master is inspired by John Kreese ( Possibly the Main Antagonist for the Karate Kid Movie Trilogy and the Cobra Kai TV Show).


But, what I'm confused at? Is HOW can the Viper Kai Sensei ( Your MLP Equestria Girls Version of the "Corrupt" Cobra Kai Sensei/Master John Kreese) be a "Long Time Friend" of the Frickin Shredder ( Oroku Saki) of all people??!! Why and how??!! I do get it that they both like Brutal and merciless forms of martial arts.


But, Shredder is the WORST!!! Not only he once owns the Once-Evil Foot Clan with World Domination in his mind. Have some connections to the Criminal Underworld. Have Mutant Henchman, and Assassins. Have a Alliance with the Kraang, and almost FRICKIN Doom/Destroy Planet Earth from the Triceraton Empire!!! All because he couldn't let go his hatred for poor Splinter to stop the Black Hole Weapon! 😠

And let's not forget he turn into a "Super" Mutant Monster. And when he finally died. He then got turn into a Zombie Servant for Kavaxas.


So, why are they "Friends" to begin with??!! Does Shredder even have "Friends", or he just used them for his own evil gain like usual. Like maybe he personally corrupt the Viper Kai Master to fight dirty in the martial arts in the first place?!

One more thing! ( Uncle's Famous Quotes)

Is Viper Kai even be a Challenge to the Rainbooms? Especially the TMNT and their Allies. Not only they are still Experts/"Veterans" to Martial Arts. But, they know how to use Weapons and everything.


Also, they have FOUGHT Worst Villains, Enemies, and other Bad Guys than some Bullies and a "Brutal" Dojo that their "Kung Fu" is so Beginners Training compared to the Hostile Villains they have face. The TMNT, and the Rainbooms have FACED the Brutality and Merciless any from the Shredder and his Evil Foot Clan, his Mutant henchman, The Kraang, Kraang Prime, Kraang Subprime, Hun and the Purple Dragons, other Mutant Enemies, the Italian Mafia, Kavaxas the Dragon Demon, the Evil Triceraton Empire, Lord Dregg, Armaggon the Shark Bounty Hunter, the MLP Villains.


Heck, they join forces like Batman, his Bat Family, the Teen Titans, to face the Joker, Batman's Rogue Gallery, Teen Titan's Rogue Gallery. And facing other DC Comics Villains, and Hitmans from your $10 Million Bounty on their heads. And they also join other Heroes like the Power Rangers, facing Power Ranger Villains, and their Henchman. Etc..


So, No Offense if I somehow upset you. But, HOW can Normal Humans that are just normal bullies, and only knows "little" martial arts. And a Dojo. Against HIGHLY TRAINED, Ninja Turtles, Sunset, and the Human Main Six that have Super EXPERIENCED facing the Worst Villains, Criminals, Mutants, Aliens, Armies, and other Bad Guys like a Monday, or a Tuesday??!!

And please DON'T Nerf the TMNT, or the Rainbooms to make it "Fair". 😑

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Give it a watch and see if you like the Netflix show, Cobra Kai.

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Woah, woah, woah. Calm down. Take it easy. Let me explain.

First, I want the younger generation and some of the minor EQG characters to shine in this story while the Turtles, Rainbooms, and their longtime allies can be their mentors just like Master Splinter.

Second, I understand that Cheerilee didn’t see the situation between Sunset and Shark, but... I can put a different teacher to take Cheerilee’s role if it makes you feel better. Or, I can have Cheerilee apologize later on in the story.

Third, no. The Turtles, Rainbooms, and their allies could’ve beat Viper Kai easily. However, for Lancer, CMC, and the younger guys, they are no match against Viper Kai unless they learned some lessons from the Turtles, Rainbooms, and allies.

Lancer is a remake of the My Little Pony Tales character in Equestria Girls form. You’ll see plenty more of these remake G1 characters like Lancer in EQG form throughout the story and future stories from Wildcard25. Rock N’ Beats is an original music band consisted of remake versions of G1 MLP characters in EQG form.

And I know, I should’ve waited for my friends in DA to introduce them in their stories, but... I couldn’t help myself. I should’ve introduced them better. I apologize to you, Wildcard25, and my friends in DA.

As for the Viper Kai Master, he met Oroku during his time in the military. Way before the Turtles, Rainbooms, and allies were born. So, I want Oroku to have a friend from his past that he never talk about during his time as the head of the Foot Clan, The Shredder. Plus, he never talk about it with his Foot generals or even his enemies.

Awesome. And it looks like Bebop and Rocksteady were hoping one of the girls could wash their van (Hint-Hint)

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Thank you, my friend.

Yeah. Some boys feel that way when they go to car washing events or other exciting festivities.

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If it makes you feel any better, I changed a little bit of his backstory. Sensei Kai was a former student of the Foot Clan, trained by Oroku Saki.

It was a good chapter, though I don't think the group should be so bad at fighting like that. I almost made that mistake in I Love Being a Rainboom. I don't want that to happen here

Oi! the fic not is bad but i don't accelerate with the Young six appereance because i don't see your reaction on human bodys

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That’s because the Young Six’s reaction on human bodies will be explained in a different story.

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Yeah, but is better read that story before on this only say

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I don’t understand your grammar

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I mean read the story of whichever the Young six came to the human world

Kai will get what's coming to him in the end, they always get theirs.

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That has not yet posted in FIMfiction, but my friend on DeviantArt will upload a story of how the Young Six went to human world along with their new friends, someday. It’s called, Rise of the Young Ninjas.

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Yes because the bad guys always lose

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I know that's why I didn't continue my story with the cast of Persona 5 why then I write something that didn't even happen or could not change the story for the cast of Ninjago.

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This is my fanfic. I created it. I do whatever it is that I want for the story to be.

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Sorry I stuck to the copyright of Wildcard

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So you're saying that you’re sticking with Wildcard25’s stories?

10675652No, I thought Wildcard25 would bother to do a story before some events are all.

Another good chapter

It is definitely on now

Let's hope their alliance holds up

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Yeah. This rivalry between CPA and CHS has to stop.

Now that was an excellent, amazing, and cool chapter that was and i can't wait to see what happens next

Good work on this chapter

Now the finals have come, I have faith in Bright Eyes

You should be proud of yourself, buddy. This is a good read.

Now that was an amazing and excellent chapter that was and i can't wait to see what happens next For bright eyes and her friends

Great job, my friend.

That was a great moment between Leo and Bright Eye

That was neat. Though I think you mean 'detention' not 'suspension'

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