Enter Viper Kai
On a bright morning weekend in CHS, the Rainbooms and the Rock N’ Beats were chatting in the cafeteria and Lancer was walking towards the two groups while carrying something light and wide, covered in a picnic sheet.
“Hey, you ready to rock... for our earth science presentation?” Lancer asked Half Note as he set the school project down on the table.
Half Note answered with excitement, “Yeah, but why did you bring it all the way here?”
“Because I want to show it you all with my friends since you’ve been doing the paperwork while I’ve been doing the construction work.” Lancer answered.
Half Note replied, “Fair enough.”
“You’ve worked on it all night? Darling, you must’ve been tired from working on your project.” Rarity said.
“I know, but it definitely paid off.” Lancer told Rarity.
Rainbow asked him, “So what’s under that sheet?”
“I’m glad you asked,” Lancer took off the sheet and unveiled the school project to his friends. It was a diorama of dinosaurs built with LEGO blocks. “Behold! What scientists believed to be Canterlot City when dinosaurs roamed the Earth,” Lancer looked at Half Note and said, “Go ahead, press the hadrosaur egg.”
Without hesitation, Half Note clicked one of the little dinosaur eggs and background sounds was played. Dinosaurs were screeching, and a volcano roaring as a little bit of smoke started to whiff in the air from the volcano. Lancer’s friends were astounded by his creation, but mostly Twilight.
“Wow! Not bad, Lancer. Not bad at all.” Twilight said as she adjusted her glasses.
“We’re going to ace this project.” Half Note told Lancer.
Lancer nodded and smiled, “Oh, you bet Half Note.”
Aside from them, there was a teen with orange hair who was walking up to a kid with the green mohawk with a scar between his lip and his nose to record him practicing hitting the ball with his knees.
“Ha, 22 in a row. New record.” The kid said with confidence.
After practicing his little soccer kicks, the mohawk kid glanced at Lancer, feeling jealous as Lancer continued mingling with his friends.
Lancer continued, “...whatsoever. This thing is a masterpiece. I mean, everything’s to scale. And at 8,251 individual pieces, this meticulously assembled model represents the exact moment when the asteroid hit-”
Without full warning, Lancer’s school project was destroyed by an incoming soccer ball and they all gasped. The students stopped and looked at what’s going on while the kid with the mohawk and his friends laughed and celebrated.
Lancer was shocked and turned his head slowly to see his old friend. Well... used to be his old friend a long time ago.
“Oh, pfft. I’m sorry, man. Looks like my ball just got away from me.” The punk kid apologized with a smile on his face, making it look like he accidentally kicked it.
“That took me three weeks to build, Shark.” Lancer replied while feeling frustrated.
“Eh, took my ball three seconds to destroy.” Shark replied and walked away to join his friends, Rumble, Heath Burns, Thunderbass, Napalm, and Valhallen to celebrate.
After the students seen enough and resumed mingling except the Rainbooms and the Rock N’ Beats, Lancer felt angry and confronted his old bud, “So this is what you have become, huh? A jerk? I thought you were my friend. I shouldn’t be surprised that this was your doing, Jerkface.”
Shark’s friends glared at Lancer and Shark said, “Don’t push your luck, Lancer. Or you won’t be so lucky.”
Then, Sunset stood up and confronted Shark’s gang while her friends looked on.
“Hey! Back off or you and your friends won’t be so lucky either.” Sunset said.
Shark scoffed until he saw Ms. Cheerilee entering the cafeteria and monitoring the students.
“Like you’ll start anything, princess. Actually, why don’t you go sleep with someone new and break his heart?” Shark replied.
Sunset didn’t like what the punk said to her and shoved him, but Heath and Valhallen saved him from falling.
Ms. Cheerliee saw Sunset shoved Shark and rushed over to the confrontation and questioned Sunset, “What’s going on here, Sunset? You know we don’t allow fighting in this school,” Ms. Cheerilee looked at Shark and asked him, “Did she enter your personal bubble without verbal consent?”
Shark answered, “She definitely triggered me in my safe space.”
Lancer figured he was lying and replied, “What? He started it by destroying my science project.”
Cheerilee looked at Shark and he answered honestly, “That was an accident,” He looked at Lancer and said, “You probably shouldn’t bring toys to school, anyway.”
“I don’t want any excuses. I just want you all to respect each other.” Cheerilee suggested.
Shark pretended to be his old, goody two-shoes guy and said, “She’s right. We should stop the aggression. Micro and macro.”
“Oh, give me a break.” Sunset replied and didn’t buy anything what Shark said.
Cheerilee didn’t like what she’s hearing and informed Sunset, “Hey. Consider this a warning, Miss Susnet. And, pick up these blocks, someone could get hurt.”
After Cheerilee walked away, Shark informed Sunset and Lancer, “For you pansies, no space is safe.”
Shark and his friends walked away and laughed while Sunset and her friends were unsatisfied and didn’t like what he had to say as they looked on.
After school, Shark and his friends along with Lightning Dust, Rolling Thunder, and Short Fuse were in a dojo, located right next to the mall. Their dojo was called Viper Kai. They wore their karate gi and stood up straight on the sides of the mat as their sensei was walking around the mat, giving them a lesson. Their sensei was buff, black hair, tattoos on his arms, wore black karate gi, and he’s almost up to his 60’s.
The Viper Kai sensei told them, “Never underestimate your enemy. Even if you think they’re weaker than you, you have to stay one step ahead of them. That’s the only way to guarantee a victory. Is that understood?”
“Yes, sensei.” His students answered in unison.
“Good. Now let’s see if you truly understand the lesson,” He approached towards a tree log with a bonsai on a pot on top, “I want you to kick this tree off the top. Heath, you start.”
Heath nodded and move forward got into his fighting stance. After that, he tried to kick the tree, but he fell down and the fabric from the back of his pants tore off. The students felt nervous after witnessing that failed attempt.
Their sensei crossed his arms, feeling disappointed and said, “Pathetic. Thunderbass, show him.”
After Heath went back to his spot, Thunderbass got into a fighting stance and performed a spinning front kick, but missed the opportunity to knock down the bonsai and fell. He groaned and whimpered as he went back to his spot.
“Stop your sniveling.” The sensei told Thunderbass.
“I can do it, sensei.” Shark said.
His sensei questioned his student, “Well, what are you waiting for?”
Shark walked forward towards the log and observed it, thinking and figuring out how to knock the bonsai off. The sensei was curious about Shark and asked him, “Don’t you want a running start?”
“Don’t need one.” Shark answered as he knocked the log off and the bonsai fell off of the log onto the mat.
Their sensei chuckled and told him, “Not bad. Not bad at all.”
Shark smiled and got back into his spot as Thunderbass felt doubt and told his sensei, “But he cheated.”
The Viper Kai sensei looked at him and said, “No, he didn’t. Unlike you, he did exactly what I asked him to do,” He looked at the rest of his students and told him, “If your mind is agile, so are you. That’s the best way to beat your enemy. Not just with brute strength. But you have to fight smart. Do that, and you’ll always come out on top.”
Those two scenes are inspired from Cobra Kai.
Here are the characters that were remakes from My Little Pony Tales. Artwork provided by jebens1.
Name: Lancer
Kind: Human
Gender: Male
Occupation: Student at Canterlot High, skaterboy, guitar player.
Eyes: Periwinkle
Hair: Red with orange red streaks
Weapon: Small nagitana
Skin: Light blue
Voice: Mason Coutinho
Bio: Lancer is a roller skater and Bright Eyes love interest. He first met Bright Eyes when he accidentally crashed into her, to which he apologized for. Later he and Bright Eyes competed in a team roller skating derby and won when all the other racers and their partners crashed.
Applejack & Rarity and Rainbow Dash & Fluttershy: Due to Applejack and Rainbow Dash's competitiveness.
Pinkie Pie & Mikey: Got distracted.
Flash Sentry & Sunset Shimmer: Didn't watch where they were going.
Afterwards, he would accompany the Turtles and Rainbooms on their adventures. Mostly just to be with Bright Eyes.
He's part of the Rock N Beats band along with Melody, Ace, Sweetheart, and a girl named Half Note, where he plays the guitar.
Trivia: A redesign of Lancer's attire and color.
Name: Half Note
Gender: Female
Occupation: Student at Canterlot High, base player
Eyes: Pink
Hair: Pink with yellow streaks
Skin: Light orange
Relatives: Unnamed parents, Sweet Note (twin sister)
Bio Half Note is the base player in the Rock N Beats band along with Ace, Melody, Lancer, and Sweetheart.
Trivia: Half Note was the base player in Melody's band in My Little Pony Tales.
So these two right here are the new OCs that I’ve created for this story.
Name: Shark
Gender: Male
Occupation: Student at Canterlot High and Bad Boy of Viper Kai.
Eyes: Blue
Hair: Black with green streaks
Skin: Tan
Relatives: Unnamed parents, Viper Kai Master (Uncle)
Voice: Jacob Bertrand
Inspiration: Hawk from Cobra Kai
Bio: This kid is a part of Viper Kai and he’s the new "Bad Boy" in Canterlot. Class Leader of Viper Kai and his uncle is his sensei. He used to be nice and good when he befriended with Lancer a long time ago until his sensei told him to "flip the script". So, he decided to change his hairstyle, got himself some tattoos on the back and his left pec, and decided to go by the codename, Shark. However, that change altered his personality and became a cocky, arrogant, and aggressive fighter. Lancer didn’t like his brutal fighting style, attitude, and didn’t want anything to do with Viper Kai. So, Lancer stopped being friends with him and walked away. Shark felt like he was betrayed. So, he decided that Lancer and his new friends will feel the Shark’s fury and learn the meaning of how to strike first, strike hard, and show no mercy.
Name: Kai Hardstrike a.k.a. Sensei Kai
Gender: Male
Age: Between 50 to 60
Occupation: Karate Class Teacher and Founder of Viper Kai.
Eyes: Light Green
Hair: Gray
Skin: Tan
Relatives: Shark (nephew), unnamed parents, unnamed siblings
Weapon: Any weapon he chooses
Voice: Richard McGonagle
Inspiration: John Kreese from The Karate Kid Movie Trilogy and Cobra Kai
Bio: He is the teacher and founder of Viper Kai. Some people call him, "Grandpa with Steroids". When he was a young adult, he used to be a in the military. After he left, he used his skills and served his allegiance to the Foot Clan. After he was replaced by Foot Bots, he opened up his own dojo to teach his students how to defend themselves and beat down any rival that stands in their way by using the three keys in his dojo: Strike First, Strike Hard, and show No Mercy. With his teachings and his nephew, Shark, by his side, Viper Kai will do whatever it takes to win, by any means necessary.
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I’m still not sure about this fic, but it is good start
Looks like an interesting opening
Question? WHY is it ALWAYS the Arts and Music Classes/Programs that gets the "Low Budgets" in the High Schools??!!
Because, I seen it's one of the main problems that you have to solve IF your a Student/Teacher in the School. By going to some competition to earn the Big Cash in MANY Movies or even some Fanfiction that I have watched/Read.
It sounds a little cliche to me. No Offense.
Also, I didn't like what Cheerilee did to Sunset back their. Sure, she didn't see what really happened. And is obviously tricked by Shark pretending to be the "Nice Guy".
But the main problem is Cheerliee KNEW Sunset, and that Sunset doesn't try to hurt students for No Apparent Reason.
Plus, Cheerliee also knew Sunset is a full fledged Hero with her friends ( Rainbooms, TMNT, and their Allies), so she should knew Sunset is not acting in her Bully Self anymore. But, NNOOO!!!! She is obviously defending the stereotypical Bully ( Shark and his "Friends"). 🙄
I hope that when the CHS FINALLY learn the True Bully Colors of Shark and his Crew, along with their Violent Sensei and Dojo in the Competition.
Cheerilee ( and possibly some others) should make a Huge Apology for not taking Sunset's side of the story in the beginning.
Or Else!
Cheerilee: 😰
Also, who is Lancer and the Rock N' Beats? Are they also your OC's that are like the "Male Versions" of the Rainboom's own Rock Band?
As for the other Characters like Shark. I do get it that he is inspired by the Mohawk Haired Guy who is ironically nickname: Hawk. I hope he can be reformed like him. And Apologize to Lancer, Sunset, the Rainbooms, and ESPECIALLY the TMNT and their Allies ( for his sake) for being a massive jerk and bully.
While, the Viper Kai Sensei/Master is inspired by John Kreese ( Possibly the Main Antagonist for the Karate Kid Movie Trilogy and the Cobra Kai TV Show).
But, what I'm confused at? Is HOW can the Viper Kai Sensei ( Your MLP Equestria Girls Version of the "Corrupt" Cobra Kai Sensei/Master John Kreese) be a "Long Time Friend" of the Frickin Shredder ( Oroku Saki) of all people??!! Why and how??!! I do get it that they both like Brutal and merciless forms of martial arts.
But, Shredder is the WORST!!! Not only he once owns the Once-Evil Foot Clan with World Domination in his mind. Have some connections to the Criminal Underworld. Have Mutant Henchman, and Assassins. Have a Alliance with the Kraang, and almost FRICKIN Doom/Destroy Planet Earth from the Triceraton Empire!!! All because he couldn't let go his hatred for poor Splinter to stop the Black Hole Weapon! 😠
And let's not forget he turn into a "Super" Mutant Monster. And when he finally died. He then got turn into a Zombie Servant for Kavaxas.
So, why are they "Friends" to begin with??!! Does Shredder even have "Friends", or he just used them for his own evil gain like usual. Like maybe he personally corrupt the Viper Kai Master to fight dirty in the martial arts in the first place?!
One more thing! ( Uncle's Famous Quotes)
Is Viper Kai even be a Challenge to the Rainbooms? Especially the TMNT and their Allies. Not only they are still Experts/"Veterans" to Martial Arts. But, they know how to use Weapons and everything.
Also, they have FOUGHT Worst Villains, Enemies, and other Bad Guys than some Bullies and a "Brutal" Dojo that their "Kung Fu" is so Beginners Training compared to the Hostile Villains they have face. The TMNT, and the Rainbooms have FACED the Brutality and Merciless any from the Shredder and his Evil Foot Clan, his Mutant henchman, The Kraang, Kraang Prime, Kraang Subprime, Hun and the Purple Dragons, other Mutant Enemies, the Italian Mafia, Kavaxas the Dragon Demon, the Evil Triceraton Empire, Lord Dregg, Armaggon the Shark Bounty Hunter, the MLP Villains.
Heck, they join forces like Batman, his Bat Family, the Teen Titans, to face the Joker, Batman's Rogue Gallery, Teen Titan's Rogue Gallery. And facing other DC Comics Villains, and Hitmans from your $10 Million Bounty on their heads. And they also join other Heroes like the Power Rangers, facing Power Ranger Villains, and their Henchman. Etc..
So, No Offense if I somehow upset you. But, HOW can Normal Humans that are just normal bullies, and only knows "little" martial arts. And a Dojo. Against HIGHLY TRAINED, Ninja Turtles, Sunset, and the Human Main Six that have Super EXPERIENCED facing the Worst Villains, Criminals, Mutants, Aliens, Armies, and other Bad Guys like a Monday, or a Tuesday??!!
And please DON'T Nerf the TMNT, or the Rainbooms to make it "Fair". 😑
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Thank you all so much. I appreciate it.
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Give it a watch and see if you like the Netflix show, Cobra Kai.
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Woah, woah, woah. Calm down. Take it easy. Let me explain.
First, I want the younger generation and some of the minor EQG characters to shine in this story while the Turtles, Rainbooms, and their longtime allies can be their mentors just like Master Splinter.
Second, I understand that Cheerilee didn’t see the situation between Sunset and Shark, but... I can put a different teacher to take Cheerilee’s role if it makes you feel better. Or, I can have Cheerilee apologize later on in the story.
Third, no. The Turtles, Rainbooms, and their allies could’ve beat Viper Kai easily. However, for Lancer, CMC, and the younger guys, they are no match against Viper Kai unless they learned some lessons from the Turtles, Rainbooms, and allies.
Lancer is a remake of the My Little Pony Tales character in Equestria Girls form. You’ll see plenty more of these remake G1 characters like Lancer in EQG form throughout the story and future stories from Wildcard25. Rock N’ Beats is an original music band consisted of remake versions of G1 MLP characters in EQG form.
And I know, I should’ve waited for my friends in DA to introduce them in their stories, but... I couldn’t help myself. I should’ve introduced them better. I apologize to you, Wildcard25, and my friends in DA.
As for the Viper Kai Master, he met Oroku during his time in the military. Way before the Turtles, Rainbooms, and allies were born. So, I want Oroku to have a friend from his past that he never talk about during his time as the head of the Foot Clan, The Shredder. Plus, he never talk about it with his Foot generals or even his enemies.
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If it makes you feel any better, I changed a little bit of his backstory. Sensei Kai was a former student of the Foot Clan, trained by Oroku Saki.