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Take it Slow

Snips and snails and puppy dog tails, that's what little colts are made of. Snails is a stallion now, so where does that leave him?

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nameundetermined

nameundetermined #1 · Jan 30th, 2021 · · ·

Excellent use of symbolism here, A+

jupitermoon

jupitermoon #2 · Jan 30th, 2021 · 1 · ·

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Thank you, I appreciate it!

Godslittleprincess

Godslittleprincess #3 · Jan 30th, 2021 · · ·

It's drabbly, but I like it. I think you did a great job giving Snails depth. Also, I'm getting Soul vibes from this story, not a ton but some.

jupitermoon

jupitermoon #4 · Jan 30th, 2021 · · ·

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A lot of my writing tends to be like that, I struggle a lot with clear-cut plots, especially endings, but I hope I can become better at it. Also dang, I really do need to get around to watching that movie huh? Thanks for the feedback!

Pete100