• Published 4th Jan 2021
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True Loves - SweetCarol



Seeking to be in love again, Big Mac and Marble find themselves happy when they meet anonymous ponies virtually.Parallel to this, Bright Mac the second and Chee Chee fall in love, but are unsure about it for their families might be related.

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Chapter 16

Arriving at the Pies' house, Bright Mac was confident, he had no doubt that he'd receive the approval of Chee Chee's parents, both of them had known him practically since he was born and knew that he was a good guy that would do anything for her.

But deep down, he felt a little insecure about it, they could think that nopony was good enough for the love of his life.

Her family received the news and were extremely shocked at first, but he did not blame them, he would have the same reaction if one of his daughters left the house and would return engaged.

"It's very important for us to know that we have the blessing and the approve of both of you." Bright Mac said politely.

"Ok, let me get this straight, you two are really going to get married? So young?" Pinkie Pie questioned the fiànces in love, but she couldn't hide a small smile when she saw that they made each other very happy.

"Well, we're just engaged at the moment, we need some months to organize everything." Chee Chee clarified with a shrug.

"Yeah, but if I could, I wouldn't wait another second and marry her right now. You guys raised an wonderful daughter, Cheesecake is the most amazing pony I've ever met in my life and I couldn't be more lucky to have her as my wife." He said, looking at her affectionately.

Chee Chee's eyes sparkled inexplicably, her heart overflowing with happiness.

"I love you so much!" She exclaimed happily as she hugged him.

After the shock, Cheese was surprised that they ended up hooked up after years of provocations and denials, but at the same time he was happy. He didn't imagine a better suitor for his daughter.

"They're just like us, we met when we were at Butty's age and ended up falling in love with each other."

"That's right, this is wonderful." Pinkie Pie agreed with a smile.

"But I have to tell you that deep down I always knew that you were the love of my life since that time." He said, looking at his wife with a loving look.

Pinkie smiled widely and gave him a tender kiss on the lips.

"Ewww so gross." Buttercup grunted, not long after, she was surprised when her father picked her up.

"Aw what's the matter my princess? Do you want some kisses too?" Cheese said, before cover her cheeks with kisses.

"Stop it daddy, that tickles!" She said between adorable laughs.

"And you little one, do you agree with all this?" Bright Mac asked Buttercup, who was completely stunned when the two arrived and said they were going to get married.

"Are you kidding? I have an older brother now!" The little filly said happily, jumping at him and gave him a hug.

They both breathed a sigh of relief that she, too, wasn't angry about it.

The night soon came, the cold wind of the night rustled the leaves of the apple trees of the orchard, there was nothing to be heard outside the barn than the cricketing of the crickets.

Big Mac was very happy that in such a short time he got along so well with the anonymous pony on the other side of his computer screen, so was Marble.

They complied with the rule of remaining anonymous, giving information about themselves, but not too revealing that they could cause suspicion of who they were, but even so, they saw that they had a lot in common.

Both felt that they could talk to each other for days or even weeks, without realizing the passing hours. Even so, he was still worried about Apple Belle, she looked very sad after fighting with her brother.

After a few hours, she finally allowed only their father to enter the room to talk to her.

Big Mac tried to convince his daughter to talk to her older brother, but respected her decision to wait until the next day to do so.

"Good night honey." He said, before giving her a tender kiss on the forehead and then left the room.

"Good night, daddy." She mumbled back.

The little filly sighed sadly, she really needed a mother's advice.

She was always grateful for the advice that her best friend's mother gave her when she was going through a complicated situation, but she couldn't help but imagine what her own mother's advice would be like.

Her father and brother always said how wonderful and loving Sugar Belle was, Apple Belle was sometimes saddened by not having many memories of her, since she was just a baby foal when her mother was gone.

Apple Belle turned her head in the direction of the small drawer beside her bed and used the green magical aura of her horn to bring herself a frame with a photo.

Bright Mac said that photo was taken the day Sugar Belle left the hospital after her birth. The unicorn was holding her in her arms while her father and brother were close to them, not even bothering to give a perfect smile for the camera, they four looked so happy together.

She had the perfect family. Why did her mother had to leave them?

A tear of sadness dripped onto the glass of the frame as the little filly stared at her mother.

"I wish you were here." She babbled between sobs and lay down again, the frame resting on her chest as she stared at the ceiling, waiting for sleep to come.

Without even realizing it, Apple Belle fell asleep.

In her dream, she was happy and smiling, running through a beautiful field of emerald green grass, which was planted with the most beautiful flowers. The sun shone in the sky and warmed her coat, but not too much. It was a perfect summer day.

A beautiful butterfly was flying overhead. She held out her hoof and the butterfly landed on it.

"Apple Belle."

Suddenly, she was surprised to hear someone calling her name. It was a voice that she didn't remember hearing before, but at the same time it was strangely familiar. Apple Belle turned toward the voice and felt her heart almost jump out of her mouth at what she saw.

"... Mommy?" She whispered, her voice breaking with emotion.

The mare smiled and nodded, opening her arms towards her.

The little filly grinned from ear to ear and didn't hesitate to run towards her mother, hugging her as tightly as her small front legs could.

"Mom, I miss you so much." She murmured in a tearful voice, feeling how good it was to have her mane gently caressed by her mom.

"I miss you too, my little apple. Look at you, you look so beautiful, so grown up ..." Sugar Belle said lovingly as she stroked her daughter's cheeks and didn't care if her hooves were wet with tears her.

"But ... Why did you have to leave? Why did you leave me, my brother and Dad? We all miss you so much."

"My love, I know you were too small to understand at the time when everything happened, but someone's life is like a storybook, some are longer, others are shorter, but all have a beginning, a middle and an end. My life may not have had so many chapters as I wanted, but it was a beautiful story."

Apple Belle smiled with her small pink eyes filled with tears and rested her head on her mother's chest again.

"Yes, indeed it was." She murmured under her breath.

"I heard that you had a fight with your brother." Sugar Belle said after a while, which immediately made the filly look up. "It is true?"

"Yes, but it was all his fault for lying to me and left me in the worst, I just can't stand lies." She said firmly.

"I see. But your brother apologized and is very sorry and guilty for lying to you, he was afraid to part with his special somepony."

"Should I forget and pretend that it never happened? It's kinda difficult."

"No, sweetie, I didn't ask you to forget what he did to you, but at least give him a chance to talk to you and explain himself."

Apple Belle thought. Although she was still hurt, deep down she didn't want to be at odds with Bright Mac, she loved him.

"Okay, tomorrow as soon as I wake up I will talk to him. Thank you mommy, I love you." She said, hugging her mother again.

"You're welcome my love, always remember that I'm always with you, even when you cannot see me."

Suddenly, her body staggered forward and when she saw it, her mother was gone. But Apple Belle smiled, feeling in her heart that they would someday see each other again and never part ways.

Comments ( 4 )

10703203
In this story she doesn't have one, but she's not worry about it, she has her friends and her family

10703594
Oh... Well... One could have hope 😉
Still a good story

It looks promising and very good, I will read it later, I will see what happens, I am sure it will be very good, forgive me if there are Misspellings in this comment, I have a very bad English, I use the translator to write this, and well, about the fanfic, google translates it to me to be able to read it , well I hope you have very good days, afternoons or nights, also all the other readers who are reading this comment.

This is a very heartwarming story you made. I'm giving you six stars for doing a good job. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

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