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Twinkletail


I write poni. I am easily distracted. I like Oreos.

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After the events of the first Apple/Pie Hearth's Warming celebration, two ponies wish to spend a little time getting to know each other better.

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Please don't tell me they did what I think they did.

Mhm.

That'll do, Twinkle. That'll do.

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My personal view is that they just kissed a lot. But if others want to interpret to other ways, I won't stop them :twilightsmile:

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Hah, I forgot about that. It was more based on the old NES game for me.

Wow, already?

Manaphy #7 · Oct 25th, 2015 · · 1 ·

I'm glad to see a Marble Pie x Big Macintosh fic out already. Anyway, excellent work as usual, Twinkletail. It was a cute story in my opinion, especially the awkward conversation about rocks. It displayed the anxiety of the situation quite well. :twilightsmile:

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Don't worry. They just played patty cake. and had sex. :P

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After reading My Sediments Exactly, I was hoping you would do a story about this. Just didn't expect you to write it today.

Cheers Twinkie!

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Ha ha! Kiss my grits, whoever downvoted me comment!!! :rainbowkiss:

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Of course they did, my friend. Of course they did...

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What? What's wrong with patty cake? You saw that tiny message about sex?

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Oh, nothing. It's just that...

[insert horrible attempt at comedy here]

Yeah.

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Oh, alrighty then. Just asking because...

[insert comment about me being terribly insane and homidal here]

Yeah.



Wanna PM about this? Don't wanna flood Twinkletails's notification box with our comments. :twilightsheepish:

Oh my gosh. :rainbowlaugh:
Is there a MarbleMac fangroup yet?

6564199 There are two! (Check out the side bar with the groups this story is in.)

Yeah... Pretty much shipped it the second Pinkie paired them up and they blushed, and this was a PERFECT first fic for me to read in this ship. Love it. The awkwardness was so REAL! I loved it. Up vote and favorited! Your writing is excellent, by the way. It's impressive!

I'm glad the whole fandom has decisively concluded that MarbleMac is totally awesome.

Good job on the story! :pinkiesmile:

Well, yay for new ships. I spearheaded the Moondancer/Twilight (Moonlight) stories, now it's your turn to promote Mac'n'Marble. There, I named it. :pinkiehappy:

Awesome story!!!! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Awwwwww

Yeah, I loved MarbleMac from the second Pinkie put them together in the search group :pinkiehappy:

And so the flood of MarbleMac starts... a flood I am quite prepared for!

I'll be reading this later, by the way.

Let it begin.

Let it begin!

LET IT BEGIN!

OH MY GOSH YEEEEEEEESSSS I NEED MORE OF THIS SHIP!!!!! And it's completely fine that I ship it because Pinkie Pie is adopted!

It was so nice to finally meet Pinkie's entire family, and the Mac/Marble thing (which I henceforth declare shall be known as "Marbletosh") was so sweet and cute.

This was a wonderful little fic about the two silent, bashful ponies discovering each other. Thank you.

AAAAWWW! So cute! :rainbowlaugh: the part she told him to shut up made me laugh!

6564565 That has to be a Bolt reference.

6564649 CONGRATULATIONS, you win rock candy!

Just imagine had Limestone caught them kissing. I am thinking her full wrath would have been unleashed upon him....hell she probably would have crushed her sister if she knew she is the one who told him to kiss her.

Thought one: they might be cousins. Thought two: that doesn't seem to matter much in Equestria. Thought three: I might just turn the mature filter off just to read a fic where Pinkie says (spoiled for a reason)...

:pinkiegasp: PULL BACK, MARBLE; MAC SAYS HIS BACK HURTS!

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Even if they are cousins according to the genealogy research Pinkie did they would be her 42nd cousins. That's 42 generations of family right there. They would be far too distant for it to even matter.

6564758 Yeah cousins....how many greats was it before a common shared ancestor? I'm thinking it was at least 10. While yeah they are certainly family its at such a distance it wouldn't really matter. Really anything beyond 1st cousins doesn't make much difference. Marrying 1st cousins (1 set of shared Grandparents) is a 3% increase of genetic defects in children resulting from the match(To an overall 6% chance compare to a normal pairings 3% average) So yeah double the risk there. 2nd cousins(1 set of shared great-grandparents) and further out have a negligible increase.


And I have way too much weird knowledge.

Eeyup! I knew it was a matter of time before they started shipping these too. :facehoof:

Wow. Great job!

I am both amazed and jealous that you can put a good story like this so fast. Excellent work.

Aren't these 2 cousins? I thought AJ and pinkie discovered they were related last season.

:ajbemused: Big Mac you two look like the characters out of one of Raritys dime store romance novels
:pinkiehappy: More like Spike and Rarity sneaking out of Twilights Crystal Castle in the middle of the night for some hanky panky!
:eeyup: Nnope ain't goin there! Nope
:applecry: Spike did Sweetie couldn't sleep for days!
:pinkiegasp: scared her that much?
:applejackconfused: Nope it was the noise they made!
:applecry: lots and lots of noise!

:raritystarry::twilightoops::moustache::facehoof:

MarbleXBigMac FOR THE WIN!!

Haha, cute! :rainbowkiss:
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(Also +1 for 'Marble Madness'; that damn game was the bane of my existence back in the 80s, :twilightangry2:)

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They found out that they might have a common ancestor several generations ago. They are far enough removed to be safe to date. In fact they're probably farther apart than two random strangers on the street.

6564899 VERY distantly, by marriage. like one of applejack's cousins two or three times removed married into the pie family. Maybe. The ink was smudged.

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Okay good if thats the case I ship them hard. They would be a cute couple. Look out Fluttershy, you have some competition:fluttercry:!

The funniest part is that I'm reading this knowing that you wrote a shipfic with Mac and Maud :pinkiecrazy:

Hang on... isn't this incest?

6565102 Well, they're extremely distant cousins, if they are related at all, so it's not really worth worrying about :eeyup:

Fundamentally, what's wrong with this story is that you had Marble break her established character to turn it into what amounts to a Farmer's Daughter joke, but one with no punchline. You are perhaps also failing to consider that the situation which you've set up might have serious social consequences for both of them. Really, this might not be a happy occurrence.

6565102 The part that ties their families together is so far out we in real life lose track of that long ago, and speaking genetically, the shared genes are literally non-existant this far apart.

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