• Published 22nd Nov 2020
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We deserved to suffer - Morbidly depressed Brony

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Talking it out

Later that day the Crusaders were sitting on the couch at Sweet Apple Acres. Their sisters and Rainbow Dash had brought them here.

"Now listen." Applejack Said, "We know you are all upset with yourselves because of what y'all did."

"We brought you all here to ask that you forgive yourselves." Rarity said.

"We love you and we forgive you." Rainbow Dash Said Sincerely.

"The last step is to forgive yourselves." Applejack said.

"We're not going to." Applebloom snorted.

"Why should we be forgiven for what we did?" Scootaloo asked.

"Because you are not the only ones who screwed up." Rarity said.

"We were wrong to abandon Sunset. We hate what we did." Rainbow Dash said.

"But you never would have done that if we never done what we did." Applebloom pointed out. "Do you know how many lives we ruined?"

"Well when you put it that way." Rainbow Dash Started, earning a punch to the arm from Applejack.

"Anyways," Applejack Continued, "You Don't go beatin yourselves up over this for the rest of your lives. We know you've been hard on yourselves because ya feel like ya deserve it. We just want the three of you to forgive yourselves."

The three girls took a group huddle and decided what to do. Actually they were just whispering nothings but they decided what they would do.

"We've decided what we are going to do." Scootaloo said.

"We're going to go my room and continue punishin and hurtin ourselves." Applebloom said as the girls went up to Applebloom's room.

Soon there was yelling and fighting and Applejack was about to go up there and break it up.

"Let them go darling." Rarity sighed.

"Girls, what are we going to do about them?" Rainbow Dash asked.

"I don't know anymore." Applejack sighed.

After a while the three Crusaders were on the ground exhausted, hurt and half crying too because of the terrible things they did to everybody, they thought that they deserved to be dead. Applebloom was hunched over in massive hunger, Sweetie Belle was still dead silent and Scootaloo caused herself to create blood by stabbing herself in the finger with a Paper clip. The three of them lied their in agony until sunset.

Author's Note:

If you think I'm a monster for writing this, Good, that's what I want you to think.

Comments ( 17 )

Do you plan on making a sequel

Soon there was yelling and fighting and Applejack was about to go up there and break it up.

"Let them go darling." Rarity sighed.

What kind of sisters are they supposed to be?

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I had a major meltdown on Christmas Eve.

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I didn't say they make good decisions

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If that were true you wouldn’t have been able to write this.

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You're right! Except I had this idea when I started and everything else just fell into place.

You're a glorious bastard that gave us no ending. It's like watching Carrie the movie unfortunately.

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Hey at least it didn't end like The Sopranos where it just cut to black mid se

That's How It Ends ?! You Said The Story Is Based On Exactly What Happened To you, So You Made This Story To Make You Hated ? Because You're Still Punishing Yourself,Right ?

Comment posted by Hoping for death deleted Jun 19th, 2021

Oh come on your not a monster! You and I are alike you were just letting your negative feelings out by writing this story.

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