Inconsistent meter and constructions abused may yet contrive to leave the odd reader amused.
Three interpretations of a tricksy draconequus.
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Haven't read the story yet, but just wanted to say that the cover was really cool.
Who made it?
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Artist is one Dahtamnay on Tumblr. If you click (or tap) on the lower-right corner of the cover image, it should take you to the source! Assuming the author has provided that information.
Y'know, I honestly don't know enough about poetry to give any constructive critique here. But I really enjoyed this. All of the poems seemed very well-done and lyrical. There was a definitely tempo to them. My favorite was definitely this bit from the third poem:
Just, ooooh. Chills down the spine for me.
I would highly suggest adding your story to some groups to get some more eyes on it.
I also linked this to another writer on here who has done some poetry. Hopefully he'll pop up in your comments sometime. Have a fave for sure though!
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You're very kind--thank you!
I'd probably be embarrassed to have this stuff seen by a proper poet--I think my structure's pretty hackneyed--but I appreciate your sharing the piece nonetheless! Glad you enjoyed the poems!
oh damn, that was really good c_c
strangely, I am the rare person who has read this but not EL XD
hah :D
the fact that there are four poems in the collection called "Three Poems for Discord" only makes things better :)
This was really good, a snake shaped like interstices especially. You never seem to trip up on any of the rhymes, and there's clearly great thought and purpose behind it all. I wish I could like this twice!