Hello all! I like MLP, of course, and I plan to post any fics I've written or plan on writing, to this site! :3
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Hmm let’s see where it goes...
Would love to see more! This seems really good so far
Well, Twilight will be very intelligent, but if after having been with who knows how many stallions her zeal still does not calm down, then logic says that she likes mares, having as proof that she was quite calm while living in the town where she was with her friends and saw them frequently, and now that she's no longer around them, her zeal is screaming at her to be with a mare, but Twilight's highly intelligent brain is obviously not listening.
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I'm sorry, but I don't quite understand what you're saying here? I don't know if it's a language barrier issue but I am quite confused.
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I think I have fixed it, sorry for that, the translator is not very reliable.
What’s with the dislikes? This story is building at good pace and I think it is good si far.
Keep up the good work.
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Thank you so much!!
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While I certainly see where you're coming from, Twilight will soon find out if a mare's touch will help.. and if not? Well, it's off to find whoever did this to her.
Towards the end there you said, “as her loins lighted,” which should be “as her loins lit.” Just a little thing I noticed there.
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Thanks for the catch! I'll fix that right away
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No prob man
So this is what you’ve been doing while I was waiting for you to update apple pie. Since I’ve gotten more interested in porn fics recently, I’ll definitely be reading on, hope you update apple pie again soon. (Don’t forget about the message I sent you about my ending idea)
I knew there was going to be sex, so why isn’t there even a sex tag?
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I forgot to add it lol. Also I don't know if/when I'll be updating Apple Pie