Twilight is facing a conundrum, and turns to Fluttershy for help.
What’s with the dislikes? This story is building at good pace and I think it is good si far.
Keep up the good work.
10514225Thank you so much!!
10513410While I certainly see where you're coming from, Twilight will soon find out if a mare's touch will help.. and if not? Well, it's off to find whoever did this to her.
Towards the end there you said, “as her loins lighted,” which should be “as her loins lit.” Just a little thing I noticed there.
10524077Thanks for the catch! I'll fix that right away
10525080No prob man
What’s with the dislikes? This story is building at good pace and I think it is good si far.
Keep up the good work.
10514225
Thank you so much!!
10513410
While I certainly see where you're coming from, Twilight will soon find out if a mare's touch will help.. and if not? Well, it's off to find whoever did this to her.
Towards the end there you said, “as her loins lighted,” which should be “as her loins lit.” Just a little thing I noticed there.
10524077
Thanks for the catch! I'll fix that right away
10525080
No prob man