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YES thank you for Continue with this it is a great story:D
A really nice chapter, and the idea of a “love scene” is quite intriguing.
Celestia is going to be a problem. I'm getting serious "Serpent of the south" vibes. Celestia is going to make a massive fuck up of the situation and it's going to come back to bite her.
Edit: it's actually the same author now that I go back and find the story. So evidently this is something of a theme in their stories.
Next chapter: Teaching Puffball how sphinx's breed. (R-18)
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Yeah, it is going on kinda same vibe. Partially to blame on my case is the trend of her being involved/having issues with either dealings and/or sealing of old/ancient evils/beings that might be a problem to her ponies a lot. Kinda traditional on some tales.
YEEEESSSSS!!!!!, IT'S BACKKK!!!😁
I hope you put in some more riddles in the next chapter.
Well, depending on how you want to handle the scene, you could always spin it off into a separate story if you feel it might skew the rating.
Would love to see what you would come up with if you do wind up doing a love scene. But if you feel that a fade to black is more appropriate, then go ahead. Do what meshes with the story more.
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Glad to see that you are still working on this story. Usually if a story goes on hiatus for more than six months, it doesn't get finished.
PS: speaking of stories where Celestia makes massive fuckups and estranges her family getting updated. Keep an eye on "And so I left", Chapter 5 will drop before the end of the week. Longest chapter I've written so far.
Absolutely magnificent chapter
They are so cute
A very fitting song would be:
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Oh that tale is on my watch-list already, but thanks for the info.
Um, isnt there some recursive spell work there, by having Hena make a secured set of conditions for All members of the Order of Knowledge, while accepting Honorary membership of such an order? As it couldnt be fully disbanded unless she remembers and revokes it as being the highest authority remaining?
I can't wait for luna to go nightmare and celestia having to swallow her pride and ask the sphinx for entry into her tomb/cave/library
Tough call. On one hoof the story hasn't hidden from the fact it gets bloody but on the other it's been dedicated to the story telling instead of overly painting out a scene. So my best answer would be if you want to do an intimate scene then write it as you have the rest of the story or write out just enough for the scene then fade to black with it transitioning to the following day/week/etc.
Love is in the air ♡
Why not cuddle that become snuggels evolving to heavenly petting and slowly to foreplay before is comes to juice Action?
Only thing i am concerned about it another blackballing pony interrupt the very moment they areabout to become one...
Tarterus knows no furry as a perfect moment is interrupted by some braindead glory seeker...
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She specifically said "full members" which would exclude her as she is an honorary member. So no loophole that would cause her to be locked out or other trouble.
If by 'love-scene' you mean 'practicing making kids', then at least implied it if you don't want to show it.
First of, It's alive!
Second of, awesome chapter, keep up the great work!
Third of, Hyvää itsenäisyyspäivää Suomi 105 vuotta! 🇫🇮
holy fuck, it's back
welcome back!!!! and i think the ‘fade to black’ would be best
The fade to black would be best if you want to keep the T rating, an option is a one shot side story for any love scenes, to keep this book T while still giving an option to those who want to read the love scene
It is nice to see another update! I was wondering how much time was left on the emotional suppression thing. Her employment contract:
I didn't expect it would hit her all at once, that is a nasty way of doing it. I am guessing it wore off now because considering intimate relations with a local marks the end of her transition period.
You could always put any smut/sex scenes in a separate story. Several other stories on this site have a Teen rated main story, with all 18+ content existing in a second story that is a sequel of the first. The second story only contains chapters that have 18+ scenes.
Those stories frequently fade to black in the main story, while continuing as normal in the Mature rated version. Fire and Steel for example does this: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/443079/fire-and-steel it has a Mature rated story that has just the chapters with smut scenes.
I for one enjoy story/character focused stories having 18+ scenes, especially when they are in a separate chapter/story. 18+ scenes are a great chance to give additional character depth by showing us how they behave and think when engaged in such activities or bonus character development as they learn things about themselves or their partner. Also, smut is smut, which we can always have more of. Especially when we are attached to the characters, and it is such a unique pairing.
Lucky Catbirb got his purrring Lady~♡
Interesting I'm curious on what happens next and will she be a important part of the mane six timeline as I can see foal twilight stumbling in her den after getting lost during a family trip and being the adorable future scholar she is adopted by hena.
I just had the thought while reading this of "Hermes will be outlived by Hena because of contract-induced immortality" and while they are currently very cute together I am wondering how that will go.
Will the Higher-Ups allow Hena to share her long life with Hermes? Or maybe he will be able to be additionally employed and given a long life matching that of Hena.
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Glad to see a new chapter and it's a very nice on to play of the last chapter of her thinking of her lol fluff ball with the chance of some nice company without having to worry about being attacked continuously by others. She'll have people that you can talk to
Estoy feliz de que se actualizará esta historia 😁👍👋
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Thank you for coming back!! Great chapter and I hope you motivation holds out, this is a good one and I’d love to see it finished. As for your question, I agree with Wrathjam. I think having the 18+ scenes in a separate work connected to this one will work best if u want to write 18+ content.
Seeing this story get updated filled me with same excitement as your serpent stories did. Fun and entertaining
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And library may contain the answer, but likely there would a price.
Hermes, Patron of All Fair Deals?
I think the terms are on the extreme side as it seems to state them even unintentionally getting distracted by something they come across while looking for whatever they were searching for.
That's really really easy to do and they may not even realize at the time that they've done it.
Searching for info on butterflies...3 hours later having gotten distracted in the first 10 minutes by the complete history of nectarines (since butterflies like nectarines), wow I had no idea that was that interesting...now why can't I find the exit?
Would be interesting to note if the honorary membership makes it recursive, I wouldn't think so as it's not an actual position but since it does have a bit of power with the organization it may.
As for the NSFW. I prefer detail but it's up to you.
If you're comfortable with writing such scenes but don't want to bump the rating i'd suggest making it a side story.
If you're also comfortable with bumping the rating it allows more freedom in writing going forward.
If you aren't comfortable with it fade to black is still a safe choice.
I'm still surprised you didn't get a bump to mature from ch3.
Awesome chapter worth the wait
I’m pretty sure it was Princess platinum who put the bounty on Hannah after all she killed his father
YEEEESSSSSS!!!
NEW CHAPTER!!!!~
and I'm ok with a love scene~
Such a wonderful read keep up the good work hun. It's rare to see such a balance of instinct and feeling with a protagonist that seems... human?
Not a paragon of good but also not evil. I loved reading what's been written and will await more.
in demonic voice " MORE GIVE ME MORE CHAPTERS
Nice chapter, good work.
I still don't understand the tick-tock, I understand what it did, but not what is means.
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She killed and hurt people so after a while she will feel their pain like the ghost riders stare
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Oh **** that's makes more sense now