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awesome chapter dude, keep up the good work!!!!!
This is so far so good I like it
Try this link to lots of riddles: https://www.rd.com/list/challenging-riddles/
I can only think of this off the top of my head: There are 4 houses on a street. A red house made from red bricks, a blue house made from blue bricks, a yellow house made from yellow bricks. What’s the green house made out off.
Answer: Glass
P.S I don’t know if bricks is common for the age the story is set in at the moment, if not, replace bricks with “painted wood” or just “wood”.
I'm the beginning of the end and the end of time and space, I'm essential to creation and I surround every place. What am I?
The letter E.
What rises without legs, whispers without a voice, bites without teeth, and dies without having life?
The wind.
Why should I spare your life?
Excellent work keep it up
I could see dirty riddles being a bit of fun like this one!
I'm spread out before being eaten. Your tongue gets me off. People sometimes lick my nuts. What am I?
Peanut butter.
god those riddles make me giggle~!
can are girl grow in skills and power by chance? I don't want greedy adventurers or dragons getting any ideas...
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If s/he lets one in the others are going to flock to have their "characters" in as well. So it is going to annoying AF so it has to be a big no.
Stomach/Stomach Acid. Would be my answer...
Some edits needed:
Sphinx
Sphinx
Sphinx
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Indeed. Looking forward towards the future riddle master.
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That ones i know. Used to trick Luna that had return from her Banishment.
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I failed both The Third was easy: Kindness and/or Generousity!
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Very Clever! Couldnt get it right! Bravo 👏
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I need more context to understand your point
Edit: I wonder what earnd me the dislike?
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"Sfinks" seems intentional. It's like ponies calling a human "hoo-man" in stories because they don't know how to properly pronounce it.
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Huh... That why i love the comment section.
Opens my mind to view angles i dont have
So far so good, keep it up.
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A lot and I do mean a lot of displaced stories can't continue since a lot of crossovers change the stories for the worse. It would be just better to have a closed displace story so you can just focus on the character(s).
https://youtu.be/HPo1kqX3le0
I just got another idea. What if Hena created an alternate timeline. Where she regressed the Sphinx that Somnambula was originally going to fight Causing this comic to happen. It would also be funny and satisfying if Hena now regressed a spoiled noble into a spoiled baby.
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Or maybe two seperate story. In one 'stand alone' and one 'with cross-overs'. I have done it. If not for my punctioation problems
( setting ' , ' ) i could get approval for most of my storys
Looking forward to it anyway it develops
Here a riddle for everyone:
Q- What do all storys have in common?
Finish or unfinished?
A- They have a END
This story had inspired me to write a new story.
Only question is how i get it approved since the english system for punctioation is problematic for me to use...
Anyone can point me to a program?
Google Doc's is great for general grammar correction for instance...
A... a lecherous manticore... ri~ight...
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stories*
If English is your first language then god bless you.
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Nope third one actualy. But its my second best in writing and speech.
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Okay. English is my second language and I know it better than my first or third.
"That thing just made a lecherous manticore and its buddies to back off and left"
buddies back off and then left
'So this sfinks thing just asked you a riddle or it would have killed you?""
unless intentional Sphinx
"He'll probably also reports about the sphinx too"
report
'"Hard to say. It only mentioned of trying to find a secure lair from somewhere else"
drop the word "from"
'"Where in the heck that lair is"
is that lair
"And how darn far I have to keep on going"
far do I have to keep going
Wow, now you're just begging for something to happen aren't you
See, you basically asked for this
You know that just makes me curious about what she would do if they decided to either just turn around or travel a bit to the sides and then continuing on?
Also, magical instincts are weird
If you want some ideas for riddles i'll make a link to a wiki page for an event from a game i like, hope they give you some ideas
Guild Wars 2 Raven event Riddles
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Actually if you check the riddle in this, you can find it in that list. I also enjoy said game vet much
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Yeah i noticed that when i decided to reread the riddles
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Fixed, and thank you very much.
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Good point. Since the Riddles give a excuse to get to tributes or meat of the losing prey i guess flee = wrong answer. Than again she might state its fine depending on her mood ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
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Constructive community is best community ♡
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Neat! Sooo... Do this riddles are all relativly strict or have wiggel room in there answers?
For instance the pony answer Hunger and my answer would been Stomach/Stomach Acid... Its basicly both right so... ?
J-90 i have a question. The picture is a rough idea or the one to one representation ? The neckless/es is coming in the future perhaps?
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Basically started as a rough idea of what she looks like, but can be used as a 'one on one' if someone wants to. And yes, the necklaces are planned on coming in future. Not spoiling.
So far so good.
You caught my interest and another follower.
The Monk
"Thirty minutes, Celestia. I was gone for thirty minutes," he said to her in an annoyed tone. "And in that time, Canterlot has been overrun with insect-like creatures, the groom is hypnotized and unable to perform his job, and you are being flung across your own throne room by...whatever that is. In thirty minutes." -Onomonopia
Very nice. I look forward to a pony giving a Technically correct answer, but not the one she was looking for. Perhaps with a beautiful or poetic solution that impresses her.
What is a man, but a miserable pile of secrets!
What is clear as the sky, sings a beautiful song, and holds the cure to all ails? But considering we're in the deep past, I don't know if they would have invented it yet, so it might be unfair at this point.
Is she a 1000 years in the past like your other story?
2 for 2 on the riddles so far, though this one was a bit harder then the first one
the only "good"/obscure riddle I know is
The one that makes it doesn't need it. The one that needs it doesn't want it. The one that uses it doesn't know it. What is it?
A grave
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Pretty much yes, since Starswirl is still a colt.
I am definitely liking this story. And since I notice a few other people did, here's a riddle for other commenters.
The rich need it, the poor have it, and the less there is the more there is. What is it?
Nothing.
Ha-ha-ha, you or someone need to do 18+ version of the scene with manticores in Chapter 2!
Well, joking aside – this story is good idea, a bit too gory for my tastes, but have great potential. Will be watching for more! =)
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He-he-he, that kind of action would last maybe a minute... If all three do something, if manticore endurance is same as male lion, which is said to be somewhere around twenty seconds. Maybe made more hilarious if these ones are "one-pump-chump's". Though lion can go several times apparently.
"That's it?"
And joking aside too, good to hear you think this story has potential. Though it is not feeling too gory, to me at least. And there will be more to come.
I'm just excited as heck as this story continues. Read the first chapter and loved, read the second and realized "Holy cow it gets updates!" And love it even more. Doing great! It reads really well! ^^
There are many more mistakes of these natures, so I would recommend, and here's something that may surprise, but, I would honestly recommend taking time to cross reference what you write with the works of other writers, ESPECIALLY IRL professional ones, like, say, Rick Riordan, or you could even go fancy and try to get inspiration (try not to fully imitate, but definitely get inspired) by the style of writing authors like Mary Shelley and even the famed Shakespeare always use.
Cross referencing like this will be a major learning process, but will reap many rewards and honestly if you don't want to read entire books by these people, just skim through and take note of the differences in grammar and flow between your work and theirs.
I am NOT saying your work is bad. It has heart, potential, and the meat of it IS very, very, VERY good. But comparing your work in this manner will help you more than you think.
Just a suggestion.
Este episodio fue 10/10
Me gustó mucho 😁🌮🌮
I love this Story❤️❤️❤️❤️
What walks on four legs in the morning, two in the afternoon and three in the evening?
Humans.
I like it so far. Thumbs-up from me.
Wonder if she has Dudeneys Mathematical Conundrums and Puzzles?
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I would've recommend Susan Cooper in this particular instance, Over Sea, Under Stone. Not too fancy or formal in form, related genre and rather large variety of ways how info dumps or individual sentences can be constructed. Oh, and some country-isms, although in her case its Welsh type, not Midland Speak.
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Modified the mentioned parts, and yeah. They do sound better now. And thank you for the fascinating advice. Will try and see if it works for me.
And nice to hear that you think this story has potential. Thanks again for the suggestion. And good luck with your stories too.
What tops, what flops and what throws the tormented?
A hat. A cap for the tortured students of the world.