Equestria is supposed to be a land of peace and tranquility, but in the last year alone three of it's greatest enemies have returned. Now Twilight Sparkle is going to find out the reason behind these returns... the story behind the puppets... the story of the Hellponies!
This is the story behind my avatar. This is also my first MLP:FIM fic.
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Rushed....
try fixing it by adding more chaps and lengthening the story. Thicken the plot a little too. Make it interesting!
- just some helpful advice
Glad you wrote a fic. I'll read it later and tell you what I think. Pre-thumb for that story title. I mean, seriously, that thing is great.
1153467 This is just the first chapter, more will be added on latter. As for the rushed part, sorry
. I havn't written a MLP story before and it came out a little awkward and rushed. Just give me time.
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Pinkie..Space?
*ILIKEID!*
Don't care much if a few parts are rushed,-
I look at stories for the plot :T
1445635 thank you for reading it!
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Certainly an interesting buildup. It's something different from the always-happy environment we are used to.
I like the plot, but the story is rather rushed.
Infernus... WHY U SO POWERFUL?!
2130602 thanks. For the comment. I am currently doing a rewrite of it so far, so it will flow smother.
Cool.
This is good. NOW UPDATE!
3978865 currently being re-written. I kinda rushed on the opening and it's sub par to me. But thanks.
3979064 I like your story. When is next chapter?
4266528 Chapters 1 and 2 are currently being revised to my standard and brought up in time to between S3 and S4. Then I will start on chapter 3. However, I can't give an ETA since I got life, work, and college to deal with.
4267202 Oh ok. Hey want to check out my story Ace Combat: Divided Feelings?