After Twilight delivers a batch of books to Sweet Apple Acres as a gesture of goodwill, she finds that Big Macintosh is not interested in her offerings. Through her efforts to discover why, she inadvertently discovers his most shameful secret.
Following the Apple Family Reunion, Applejack finally has some time to reflect on her life and the many lessons she's learned about friendship, family, perseverance, etc. However, perhaps the most important lesson of all takes a little more...
It felt somewhat clumsy at times, but was mostly okay. Not bad, but definitely space for improvement. I'm pretty sure I spotted a few mistakes here and there.
Liked just for the Rammstein reference.
Ha ha?
That... Was brilliant.
Thanks for helping me remember that wonderful song.
An excellent song. Both of them.
The story was short and to the point, though I'm not quite sure what i think about the ending.
I can't decide whether I think you're a terrible writer or an excellent troll.
I think it's a bit of both.
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How was the prose?
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It felt somewhat clumsy at times, but was mostly okay. Not bad, but definitely space for improvement. I'm pretty sure I spotted a few mistakes here and there.
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Kk, thanks.
poor big mac
I love dark comedies.
“Applebloom has inoperable cancer.”
Umm...what? It's well written, but...I don't understand. At all. I did until the end, but now I'm just like...what?
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He's fine.
Well, not really.
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Glad you enjoyed it.
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The second matrix was crap.
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Please tell me this is a trollfic