The ruling Queens of a world called Rootbase, come to Princess Twilight's castle via a metal portal or gate. They seek her aid as her world is peaceful and free, unlike theirs and they wish their pupil to learn from that to build a better future.
I thought up this story idea while looking at some concept art for what someone thought Generation 5's main cast would look like. Their personalities aren't like the artist envisioned but they are different. I plan on making this a full story so let me know if you like what I put out but bear in mind that there is more to come.
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Nice read. It is fascinating to wonder how people’s personalities can be different through unique experiences throughout their life, and meeting these unique personalities in person would be a reminder to be grateful of your lifestyle or circumstances. However, despite this, there will always be more to learn from each other, through the mistakes that they would have made in different junctures.
One thing - the similarities between the characters makes it harder for me to distinguish the different personalities of the same pony to be from which universe. Other than that, however, the story is a good read with few errors in writing. Keep it up and welcome to the site!
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Thank you for the well thought out comment. It helps me keep going knowing that there are people who at least liked my start here. ^_^
I'm hoping that the differences between the characters well help define their personalities part from the show most of us know. Though I can't be sure of that just yet. I hope the later chapters I'm working on will give the room they need to show how different they have grown up and are from the counterparts they will be talking to and interacting with.