The Tale of Savory Slide's Secret Sauce
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Wait wait wait! Are you implying Pinkie used an adjective without combining it with another adjective?!
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oh, idk? lol! It was just one of the words!
By the chapter Title 'name' and the ending. Is there going to be a second part?
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I don't consider it bad writing, so I guess I'm not general. The main objective of those parts for me are to describe how someone looks, especially for a character that the reader has no other reference to.
Well, I quite enjoyed this. It's short, focuses on her pleasure, and isn't non consentual so a win win win.
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I see nothing wrong with having a flowery description of your characters. The important point is that the story doesn't stop to accommodate those aspects. So long as you can keep the plot progressing with some momentum and the reader is engaged, it doesn't matter. Do what you feel is right.