• Member Since 25th Feb, 2012
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Lenora Goff


To be written later

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It had been a long, weird, night. Twilight Sparkle had a dream about being turned down by Rainbow Dash. That didn't make any sense, she didn't love her cyan friend.

Did she?

That thought being pushed out of her mind, Twilight starts through her day. It seems as though there's something off about her, though.

Yes... this is a pointless story. I just wrote it while i was tired. I wanted to give it another shot at writing here.

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Comments ( 7 )

Wait... what?

Interesting... Altough a little... I don't know. Have a thumbs up and let me think...

PD: Small mistake
"stop her from competing another large order. " should be completing

1099750

Wow, thanks for catching that.

Edit: Also, yeah, I know it's quite out there. It was about 9pm when I started, and I typed it out in an hour.

I think you did a great job with this fanfic, congrats! But it has a lot of errors and the usual common typos in there, just some minor mishaps is all... I give it 2.5 stars. I don't usually comment on stories, only first timers, and the most I have read are only 3 stars worth. But great job BTW!
Please, could you be kind enough and return the favor by reading, favouriting and liking my stories? Thank you so much...
And be sure to watch me and check out my userpage.
THANKS SOOOO MUCH:pinkiehappy::heart:

None of them have ever really recovered from the emotional wounds of Discord's mind-screw, have they?

1101042

What errors? I can't find them, obviously, and nobody ever seems to tell me -what-. It seems if I get anything, it's telling me there are mistakes that need to get fixed.

1103141

Does anyone ever?

Interesting story. I spotted a couple errors you might have made by mistake:
When Twilight is at Fluttershy's cottage, you wrote "Is is PeeWee." The second "is" should be "it."
After Twilight daydreams about Applejack, you wrote "her was obviously studying way too hard." "Her" should be "she."
I sometimes miss errors in my stories as well :twilightsheepish:

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