This is NOT going to go well. For neither Luna OR Trixie. Well, Luna should have been more specific in what she wanted. Also, I noticed you used 'stares' instead of 'stairs' in your sentences.
Daaaaaamn, Luna's so harsh on trixie. Also, who wouldn't look at princess Luna's flank? I'm just saying it's a pretty good looking flank if I do say so myself
*scotish accent* SOO ANGRYEEEEE. I'm sleepy don't judge me.(well you could but i wouldn't care) *yawn* sleeping duringthe day eh? going to do that right now, readed all night long. I love it when my alter-name is fitting.
Clop? Without being allowed to ogle those gorgeous flanks? Luna needs to just chill out and let Trixie suck that juicy pussy. Maybe pull the stick out of her ass too...
Hmmm. Well, I gave it a shot. It's a good idea, but it's progressing so predictably. So far, there's one hint at the future relationship so heavy it's like getting hit in the face with a ship! You heard me. And I keep spotting missed opportunities for better developed jokes and dialogue that I would rabidly correct if I could, and that's cutting into my enjoyment. I really could like this, but its too basic for my tastes as it is, and just looks like a missed chance at something great.
That ending.
Twi, how could you!
I see a threesome in the future
damn, Luna is royally pissed
This is NOT going to go well. For neither Luna OR Trixie. Well, Luna should have been more specific in what she wanted. Also, I noticed you used 'stares' instead of 'stairs' in your sentences.
Daaaaaamn, Luna's so harsh on trixie. Also, who wouldn't look at princess Luna's flank? I'm just saying it's a pretty good looking flank if I do say so myself
Wow Jeez the chips are on the shoulders arent they .
LUNA Chill come on
*scotish accent* SOO ANGRYEEEEE.
I'm sleepy don't judge me.(well you could but i wouldn't care)
*yawn* sleeping duringthe day eh? going to do that right now, readed all night long.
I love it when my alter-name is fitting.
Nice and amusing, only wish the chapters were a bit longer. : )
1107676 dont we all
Clop? Without being allowed to ogle those gorgeous flanks? Luna needs to just chill out and let Trixie suck that juicy pussy. Maybe pull the stick out of her ass too...
1125518in time... in time...
I'm confused. Is the romance between Twilight and Trixie, or Trixie and Luna? Or Both?
it's a Lunixie.
Hmmm... still don't know why this is mature. Maybe teen but Mature? No, not seein' it.
Dat ending
Well, screw you too, Luna.
*stairs
Unless the ivy is making bell chimes, *peeling
3578021 3578026 Fixed. Thanks!
Hmmm. Well, I gave it a shot. It's a good idea, but it's progressing so predictably. So far, there's one hint at the future relationship so heavy it's like getting hit in the face with a ship! You heard me. And I keep spotting missed opportunities for better developed jokes and dialogue that I would rabidly correct if I could, and that's cutting into my enjoyment. I really could like this, but its too basic for my tastes as it is, and just looks like a missed chance at something great.
Figured I'd give you a reason.
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