Luna becomes bored at night, so to give herself more responsibility, she decides to adopt a student.
Nice
3576704 Np. I try not to point out everything though, but if you want me to go through and send you a message with anything I can x3
3576712 No, you don't have to. I mean, if you really, really want to, I'll go through and edit anything I agree with, but you really don't have to.
3576719 Eh, just felt I'd offer xD I am the sort of person that finds typos in published textbooks and novels, for some reason they jump at me.
D'aww! They look so cute in that cover-art together.
How dare it be too late at night to start reading this immediately?!
Bah... Well, I have something to look forward to tomorrow, after college.
3576839open the image in the new tab.you will be suprised.
Trixie honestly thinks locking herself in the bathroom is going to save her?
raised the moon
Raise the moon
3577290 what hay that's freaky
3577290Why is this happening!?
3578981Because luna is happy when trixie is sad
Lots and lots of errors in word use and sentence structure, as well as tense.
Far too many to casually address, consider proof-reading the story a few more times, backwards...
That was cute and I hope they will get closer soon the suspense is killing me I think Luna is a bit OP here but I still love the story and I look forward to what will happen next I WANT MOAR SOON! If that is alright with you
Nice
3576704 Np. I try not to point out everything though, but if you want me to go through and send you a message with anything I can x3
3576712 No, you don't have to. I mean, if you really, really want to, I'll go through and edit anything I agree with, but you really don't have to.
3576719 Eh, just felt I'd offer xD I am the sort of person that finds typos in published textbooks and novels, for some reason they jump at me.
D'aww! They look so cute in that cover-art together.
How dare it be too late at night to start reading this immediately?!
Bah... Well, I have something to look forward to tomorrow, after college.
3576839
open the image in the new tab.
you will be suprised.
Trixie honestly thinks locking herself in the bathroom is going to save her?
Raise the moon
3577290 what hay that's freaky
3577290
Why is this happening!?
3578981
Because luna is happy when trixie is sad
Lots and lots of errors in word use and sentence structure, as well as tense.
Far too many to casually address, consider proof-reading the story a few more times, backwards...
That was cute and I hope they will get closer soon the suspense is killing me I think Luna is a bit OP here but I still love the story and I look forward to what will happen next I WANT MOAR SOON! If that is alright with you