This was a very nice chapter. You could see Trixie's genuine gratitude and Luna's inner emotional conflict. I know the latter will only get stronger. I eagerly await the next chapter.
1279337 I only read the one with Trixie and Fluttershy. Lol, that's cool.
Haven't been reading a lot because of my glasses getting cracked. I'm going to the eye place to get them repaired today though. I wish I didn't need glasses
I've been noticing a lot of little things but not sure if you have any interest in a proof-reader. If you do though, feel free to let me know :P Else I'll keep to myself.
Dang. This story stated interesting but the sudden shift of Luna from being a strict teacher to being so proud and stuff is just jarring. I feel like our would have been much more interesting if Trixie had to do more to make Luna think more of her
Bravo! Another excelent chapter on another excellent story!
that last part was heartwarming
Bravo! Another excelent chapter on another excellent story!
This was a very nice chapter. You could see Trixie's genuine gratitude and Luna's inner emotional conflict. I know the latter will only get stronger. I eagerly await the next chapter.
1276387 Thinking about changing cover art... What do you think?
Given the change of mood in the story, sure. Provided, you can find a good replacement.
1276407 how's about... THIS!
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1276426 Cool.
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Curse you and your adorable pictures!
*rummages through chest*
AHA! Found it!
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1279337 I only read the one with Trixie and Fluttershy. Lol, that's cool.
Haven't been reading a lot because of my glasses getting cracked. I'm going to the eye place to get them repaired today though. I wish I didn't need glasses
I love the new story pic. It is really cute.
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D'awwwwwww that picture is so cute.
Hmm, this is an interesting story. Never exactly read a TrixLuna story before.
Dun dun DUN!!!!!!
I've been noticing a lot of little things but not sure if you have any interest in a proof-reader. If you do though, feel free to let me know :P Else I'll keep to myself.
1320156 I guess it's what makes it unique?
Mmmmmm-not sure if I approve of the mild hints of shipping here.
Teacher+Student stuff sets off red flags in me, being a teacher myself.
Dang. This story stated interesting but the sudden shift of Luna from being a strict teacher to being so proud and stuff is just jarring. I feel like our would have been much more interesting if Trixie had to do more to make Luna think more of her