That amulet isn't like the one Trixie wore when she took over Ponyville, is it? I would have thought she would have been a little more apprehensive about putting another artifact around her neck.
3538392 Best to think about it like this: Trixie, unlike Twilight's met her teacher at a much older age. In this fiction, the reader could envision Trixie being twenty one or older, but I understand how that can still leave some uneasy with the pairing. Nevertheless, thanks for stoping by.
3538773 Perhaps. In any case, I still think Trixie would not have been anxious to put on ANY kind of magical artifact. Especially, after Luna's warning.
“The power of the moon, when brought to far exceeding levels of nighttime can render you unconscious, and the wrath of the moon can take over your entire being.”
>reading through first half "Okay, so aside from a few allusions and wayward glances, I'm not seeing why there's a Mature tag--" >chapter 5 "...oh." (*pomf*) *smack* Dammit, Silver!
Unique shipping. The pacing is a bit jumpy, but considering the chapters are averaging less than 1.5k words, it's not too bad. Character progression is acceptable, again considering the word count; were the chapters longer, I'd expect more fleshing out of the characters.
Fun thought; you could call the ship Lunaxie, pronounced like lunacy.
That amulet isn't like the one Trixie wore when she took over Ponyville, is it? I would have thought she would have been a little more apprehensive about putting another artifact around her neck.
3538392 Best to think about it like this: Trixie, unlike Twilight's met her teacher at a much older age. In this fiction, the reader could envision Trixie being twenty one or older, but I understand how that can still leave some uneasy with the pairing. Nevertheless, thanks for stoping by.
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I don't think it's the Alicorn Amulet, rather the Amulet of Luna's Moon.
Rather fitting, wouldn't you agree?
3538773 Perhaps. In any case, I still think Trixie would not have been anxious to put on ANY kind of magical artifact. Especially, after Luna's warning.
Err, is giving a volatile magical artifact to Trixie some kind of test because yeah... history isn't exactly great with her and amulets.
>reading through first half
"Okay, so aside from a few allusions and wayward glances, I'm not seeing why there's a Mature tag--"
>chapter 5
"...oh."
(*pomf*)
*smack* Dammit, Silver!
Unique shipping. The pacing is a bit jumpy, but considering the chapters are averaging less than 1.5k words, it's not too bad. Character progression is acceptable, again considering the word count; were the chapters longer, I'd expect more fleshing out of the characters.
Fun thought; you could call the ship Lunaxie, pronounced like lunacy.