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WritingIsDope


I'll occasionally write a story when I feel like it

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Magic Blaze is framed for an atrocious crime that he didn't commit and is sentenced to life at the prison of peace, a rehabilitation security facility in which the prisoners are taught to be redeemed of the crimes they committed and learn to love life and each other. Magic is given his own sector in the prison due to his permanent incarceration and shares it with his new big sister, Golden Emerald. Stories are told and lessons are learned along the way at the Prison Of Peace.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 8 )

This story so far has me intrigued I wonder what'll happen next.

Will Magic Blaze ever be able to appeal his case, further down the line?
Or is this a when you're sentenced they 'throw away the key' case?

I feel this might be a 'make or break' for many...
maybe for me to, but I'll at least read a couple chapters more to decide.

Anyways... good job so far.
Keep it up!

9804453
Thank you ^^

The story has only just begun, I have a lot more to tell.

9804724
I have plans and ideas on how to continue the story, and the story will come to a conclusion that I hope will satisfy both the audience and myself.

Thank you very much ^^

9804795
In stories of Miscarriage of justice , I tend to love the moment where the hero('s) get the BSoD
When they figure out how bad they fucked-up and starts to figure out how to make it right, if that is possible at all.

In this case if it comes to it... how will they make up for taking away his magic permanently?
From his name I guess it played a BIG part in his life. Guess that it'll come up in a later chapter (:rainbowkiss: I'm getting excited). NO SPOILERS please, that was rhetorical!
Just imagine Twilight's expression when she learns that she helped to take away the same gift that she loves so much! (If the way that she behaved, a princess, helped sway the jury...)

I am the kind of guy enjoys schadenfreude IRL when his friends gets unlucky (in non serious ways that can get fixed), but will be one, if not the first to help if I can.
It have come to the point that when I enjoy their ''misery'', they know that this is actually not a big deal and this might just become a fun story for later.


Ps: Waaaait a minute.....:trixieshiftleft:..... is this a MLP version of ''Deadman wonderland'' with some changes?:trixieshiftright:

9804856
I’m really glad you’re enjoying the story so far and I’m happy to hear that you’re excited for future chapters :)

By the way, my story wasn’t based off Deadman Wonderland since I hate that anime, but I’ve only just realised how there’s some similarities in the story. My story is going to be more lighthearted than Deadman, but will contain some dark elements along the way such as abuse and self hatred.

Comment posted by Dahlia deleted Oct 13th, 2021
Comment posted by Dahlia deleted Oct 13th, 2021
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