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Sixty Chapters already Written!
Might as well give this a read
Edit: Well written, but there's two things I saw
Needs a space between these two paragraphs
Also, always indent new paragraphs using the tab key
EX:
Keep up the writing though
The dislikes without comments are pretty annoying, but whatever. If only one pony wanted to read it, I'd write it for them and only them. Heck, if nopony cared for it, I'd still write it.
Its about time someone gave luna an apprentice.Thank you so much.oh and hope to se more chapter
Six dislikes. No reviews explaining why. That's a little depressing. Oh well.
First!! I have the Magicks!!!
I shall watch and see where this goes.
Liking because I also want to write something relatively dark, and it makes me sad to see you get dislikes!
Ah, another good chapter that was good to read. A few errors here and there, but nothing serious enough to be concerned about.
Looking forward to the future chapters
Must see MAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRR!
Well this is Awesome so far, Hope you throw in some more chapters soon if you really have that many finished, and adjust when errors are pointed out by readers? just a thought, Great story.
Are you gonna continue this?
1920749 Yes. Not sure when, I had a technical disaster a fair while ago, losing the unedited versions of chapters four through thirty seven, and haven't had the heart to finish this. I'm working on other projects, I rarely touch the reconstruction of chapter four but it is in progress.