...A normal night at sugarcube corner, a huge smash-hit party following the wedding of Shining Armour and Cadance turns bad for a stallion. A killer on the loose in Equestria shoots and kills two. This follows around one of two stallions shot and killed from a third person perspective (narrative), as if he were still alive.
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Yeah, it's still in the works...
But hey. I have good feelings about this one. This isn't going to be any sort of rip-off.
Anyway, tell me what you think! I'll try and get a chapter up every week, since school is starting again...
I'm off.
~MKII
Like I said... there's going to be plenty more.
Hopefully I can get something up by this evening, maybe a couple of chapters. I'm shooting for about 9,000~16,000 words across all of my chapters
~MKII
"A Normal night"
"A Serial killer"
I appreciate your enthusiasm, but only it's the first word of a sentence that should be capitalized, not the first two. You might direct that passion for capitalization toward proper nouns like "sugarcube corner".
COMPLIMENT: You used "it's" correctly! That puts you way ahead of the game.
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Fixed the issue with the first sentence. I'm having someone help me edit the story, so things are still going to be a bit rough while we get things going here.
Glad you liked it.