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Rethewa


Devout follower of best horsegirl

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The best times of Sunset's life are when she's with Twilight. They're perfect for each other, and everybody knows. But one day, a seemingly harmless experiment might well change both their lives forever.


Sex tag is just for innuendoes and language and stuff.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 12 )

this is like all the happy straight in my face :raritystarry:

Thought they get physical at the end.

9841951
jfasnog;hads


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H A P P Y
look how H A P P Y they r

9843068 can't believe all the downvotes tho. Sum ppl r just :facehoof:

Happiest?

1 this reads like a childrens book teaching kids to read

2. the ending was just bad this is not some happy fluff fic its juts a troll fic

9843870 um no, sweetheart, it's romantic. Like romeo n juliet. U just don't understand art.

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art is subjective and if the only defense for a work you can muster is "you just dont understand art" you have no defense

9843870

1 this reads like a childrens book teaching kids to read

And then everybody would chuckle and guffaw and take a few fat swigs of their ale/mead/beer/whatever and they’d all say, “No, no, don’t be a testicle, nobody’s that stupid, ya lying sack of beans.” And then the first fellow would be all, like, “Oy, who you calling a testicle, ya swine-faced monkey-shagging dog-pissing puddle of rancid sputum?”

... if I had kids I wouldn’t want you talking to them if this is how you think they should learn to read.

2. the ending was just bad this is not some happy fluff fic its juts a troll fic

art is subjective, tho, so that’s just like your opinion and stuff.

...and tbh writing this made me happy and it didn’t really have a plot or whatevs so I would totes call this a happy fluff fic.

Why does this story have so many dislikes? I mean, it can't be that bad, right? ...Right?

Call me crazy, but I am starting to get the sense that you might not be the biggest fan of Sunset. Just an inkling of course. Just a tiny sense of it hinted subtly through your works.

I think this is the first story of yours I was sad for the end! (And I liked the one that ended with a tentacle monster squeezing itself into Sunset's twat.) I kinda wanted to see space travel via lesbian-powered rocketry! Such promise!

Can we get more Fishyboobs and tentacle peeners? Aren't we due for one or the other, or both.

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2. the ending was just bad this is not some happy fluff fic its juts a troll fic

OMG that is so rude! There r no trolls here - that's just Sunset's face, ok? That's just how she looks, she was born like that and she can't help it. Not a troll. Y r ppl r so mean 2 her?!

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