Can someone tell me what this space is for?
Following the death of Fluttershy, Discord is in distress.
So when Rainbow Dash tries (and unknowingly fails horribly) to cheer Discord up.
Discord decided to give Rainbow dash a... 'gift' of sorts.
One that might change her life forever.
Written by Treforce.
Commissioned by Muffin_Mare.
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I would love to hear your comments and thoughts about my story.
Took me a while since I read this during bits and pieces of down time while at work. You asked for my thoughts on the discord server, so here they are. I can’t say that I really liked it. Putting aside the many grammatical/punctuation errors, the whole story felt a bit rushed. The first act could have used some more detail. Then there’s Discord. If you deserve a medal for anything, its how you handled his weirdness. The many trails of Rainbow Dash were pretty creative and I did enjoy them. However, while this is my own opinion, I found it hard to accept that Discord could be so cruel to Rainbow Dash and all because of her trying to help him move on? I hope that this doesn’t discourage you from writing in the future. You’ve got potential and if you ever need a proof reader or someone to bounce ideas off of, let me know. I’d love to help you write your next piece.