• Published 16th Jul 2019
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Spike the “Baby” Dragon - IronTiger26



Spike catches Discord in the middle of something private, and the teenage dragon ends up having the most humiliating time of his life.

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All of that sounds awesome~ maybe have discord throw in some involuntary bowel movements? Maybe make it so that the diaper rubbing against his groin gives spike intense pleasure even if it is humiliating and degrading and even if he isn’t into it. Maybe nopony notices if he makes a mess until he asks them for a change out of his messy diaper. Lots of time in a baby bouncer would be fun to combine with all of the above~

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Bonus 1: In this world, when dragons hit puberty, their “private areas” are exposed, meaning that teenage dragons usually wear clothes, mainly just pants, to cover up and are only able to hide them in sheaths when they’re fully grown adults. Of course, this means they go completely naked until they’re old enough. And as Spike will eventually go there for a few days to get cared for like every other hatchling...well, I’m sure you know what he’s in for.

I thought you might make it that the dragons from the Dragonlands would always walk around in the complete nude because they have no concept of wearing clothes or modesty and male dragons have huge human cock and balls with no sheaths which leaves their privates fully expose something like in these pics here Derpibooru: #1454918 and #555316. And because Spike was raised by ponies he have modesty thus making him feel very awkward due to him being completely naked around other naked dragons and very uncomfortable when he is surrounded by a bunch of naked dragon dudes thats always have their junk out on display.

6: Spike will still be allowed to eat gems, but only as a snack from now on. Meaning he’s getting baby food, bottlefed and very possibly breastfed from now on.

If you decide to have Spike get breastfed you can give the mares crotch-boobs.

3: Yeah, I’ll give the “Baby Hero” a break and let him still have saved the Crystal Empire, just the circumstances will be much different than what happened, and he won’t have been the only one to do so. And that could be very fun.

I don't know who should I feel more sorry for, Spike for everyone seeing and treating as a baby or King Sombra who think that he have been defeated by a baby dragon that no older then a foal.

5. Only diapers and the clothes at the Cake’s House and Twilight’s Castle will fit snugly on Spike. Clothes that are made by Rarity, for example, will only fit up to his midsection, leaving everything below completely exposed. Same with everything at the castle, everything baby related there is about Spike’s actual size, but anywhere else and he’s in for a tight fit. And he’s going to be helping her model various baby clothes, even dresses.

Can you make it that Spike not wear a diaper while he is wearing small baby clothes that are made by Rarity and other cute outfits? So that way Spike is even more embarrassed (that make wish he was wearing a diaper) by having him wear small girly outfits that leaves his privates expose for all to see (of course they aren't aware of his expose junk they think are seeing a baby dragon wearing small baby clothes that fit him. But the thought of his junk being expose for everyone to see make him feel embarrass and anyone that can see him as a teenager, like the CMCs will make fun of him for wearing small girly clothes and having his junk out on display) while out in public.
And that all for now. But you please not have Spike soiled himself in the story? Him just wearing diapers is fine but I just don't like anything involving scat or watersport.

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Those all sound good, especially the ones where he feels pleasure, and where he’s stuck in used diapers until he goes up and asks for a change. And maybe he’d be stuck in a baby bouncer during a meeting, meaning he’d have to throw a tantrum to get Twilight’s attention.

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That dragon one is good, but I was going with the idea that they’d be wearing something, and Spike would be the only one naked. But now, I’m getting the idea of having Spike sitting on their lap.

That was the plan for the breastfeeding.

Maybe Sombra, as he’d go down in history for his defeat at the hands of a clueless baby.

And again, that was the plan. Spike won’t wear a diaper while he’s modeling, but he’s gonna wish he was as that will be when he realizes that they can see him too.

Sorry, but there will be some. I’ll do you a favor though and say when it happens in a chapter, and what sentences are before and after it happens.

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Okay, thanks for the heads up. And I too also really like the idea of Spike sitting many laps of a bunch of naked teenage dragons while their huge junk are uncomfortably poking him in the rear or his back. I can see this happening to Spike a lot of times while being in the Dragonlands and even see it happen while Garble and boys are using Spike to pick up some chicks.

Maybe if you wanna go the pleasure route you could have spike get erections is his diapers from the padding so twilight and others could rub the front of his diaper till he cums and just have it rationalized in their mind that he just tired himself out after getting so excited from the attention. However everypony would still snicker and giggle at the sight of the drake being rubbed to climax. Love the meeting idea~ could also throw in some straight jacket bondage in case he was being fussy and struggling ealier in the day and after the tantrum gets something to fill his mouth to muffle him. I’m just spitballing so feel free to ignore this if it is outside your comfort zone.

Unlike everypony else, the twins saw what was going on. They saw Spike as a teenager, wearing a sailor suit and the biggest diaper either of them had ever seen, and face as red as Pinkie’s was when she tried hot food in front of them.

The POV is from Spike right? So he can't know things like that. He can only deduce it from their reactions. It would be better I think if you moved this line to after Spike notices the foals laughing. Then instead of a universal POV it is his own thought.

This is cute nevertheless, hope to see it continued

2. Children, such as the CMC, Babs Seed or Diamond Tiara, will also be aware of Spike being a teenager, but they’ll mainly just crack jokes and making fun of him for still wetting himself. And no, they won’t tell any adults about him, the spell makes sure that they never even consider to do so.

That seems kind of unnecessary. The adults see Spike as a baby they aren't going to believe the kids. After all if you see a baby and a 8 year old tells you it's an adult do you believe him?

One fun rule could also be that spankings are considered the appropriate punishment for Spike and they are always seen as justified no matter how administers them.

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When I get in the mood to write again, I’ll change it to that. Those are both great ideas.

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I would also make him a magnet for abuse by fillies and colts. After all if they can get him in a spanking position and deliver at least 1 blow they can give him as many spankings as they want without consequence.

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That too. That’s a good one.
Thanks for the ideas.

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though try to make the reactions of different characters diverse. It helps greatly to prevent the story getting too repetitive. So I would remove rule that all the children laugh at him. That they are all themselves. However children are by nature mischievous and sometimes a little cruel. If they know they can bully someone without consequence they often are tempted to try. Sometimes even those who are otherwise nice.

For example if Sweetie Belle just had a fight with Rarity and she stumbles across Spike. Spike says a poorly worded word of comfort and that makes Sweetie take her frustrations out on him.

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May be a bit tough, but I’ll try that. Thanks for the suggestion.

I just stumbled upon this sweet story of yours. I love it. I can't wait to read more of it. Hope the Hiatus won't be long.

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I do hope you will try. I always like seeing the different reaction of the characters. AB would have a very tough love attitude towards it and likely be Spike´s main ally. However she would enjoy being in charge of him and even punish him. SB will more so treat him as a plaything, putting him in all kinds of outfits and acting out scene´s. Scootaloo would be the one who would bully him most as she would try to employ the same tactics as RD but doesn't completely understand them.

5. Only diapers and the clothes at the Cake’s House and Twilight’s Castle will fit snugly on Spike. Clothes that are made by Rarity, for example, will only fit up to his midsection, leaving everything below completely exposed. Same with everything at the castle, everything baby related there is about Spike’s actual size, but anywhere else and he’s in for a tight fit. And he’s going to be helping her model various baby clothes, even dresses.

I don't exactly understand how that would work. If the clothes are revealing because they don't fit it would be very uncomfortable for Spike. Maybe instead make it that Rarity only makes clothes for him that leave his everything below his midsection exposed. For easy changes and the like.
Also I kind of want her to make him something like a onesie so maybe instead you could make it that Rarity makes only foal clothes or those that keep his diaper available.

are this still wip or over?

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