9737744 Here some more suggestions: 1. Rarity forced Spike to wear small cute outfits for little girls something like here and here except the skirts are very short for his size and they don't go down to his hips which expose his crotch and rear for all to see. 2. And while Spike is being babysit by Ember and the other dragons in the Dragonlands Spike does not wear any diaper due to baby Dragons in the Dragonlands do not wear diapers. But that also means that Spike be completely naked while his junk is hanging out completely in the open which will leads to some uncomfortable and suggestive situations like Garble having Spike ride on his shoulders his huge Dragon junk bounces and being press in the back of Garble's head. 3. Twilight take Spike to the School of Friendship and they bump into the Students Six. While Twilight busy at the school she have the Students Six watch Spike while she works so they show Spike around the school to show how important his "mommy's" works is for everycreature at the school then they take him to the school's grounds so they can play and while playing some inappropriate and suggestive shenanigans happen due to Spike really being a teenage Dragon but they're unable to see that. 4. Mrs. Cup Cake force-feed Spike her breast milk directly from her breast like a baby when she run out of milk to feed Spike with. That all of my suggestions for now.
1. twilight get spell/pill so she produce milk in breast can breastfeed him.
2. be fun if few pony won't effect by discord magic say like rarity or kids so they still make joke at him wear diaper as teenager.
3. take spike to crystal empire to have playdate with furry heart and he still seen as hero by a diaper dragon hero baby. while twilight get distracted by guard. spike could expire a few up and down while wear the diaper. like use the diaper as way carry gems in the diaper as bag.
4. spike could wake a differ size, or twilight could take vist it her parents.
1 and 2: Again, that’s now planned, but thank you for the extra detail.
3: Don’t really have a good understanding about them and their personalities aside from Gallus and Smolder. And not really interested in trying to write down Yona’s speech pattern. (Also meaning, as much as I love her, Zecora will not be appearing in anything I write anytime soon) But I’m willing to give it a go for that scenario, could be fun. 4: I’ll answer this one with a similar one below.
9739391 I’m aware of that, which is why I’m asking for suggestions. Could you tell me what I could put down to make the story go smoother? Would help out and I am willing to listen to ideas.
9739398 1: I am interested fully in making Spike breastfeed, I’m just not entirely sure how to write those scenes.
2: I’m actually making a thing that will explain what the spell Discord cast actually does in detail, that will be among what’s talked about.
3: Yeah, I’ll give the “Baby Hero” a break and let him still have saved the Crystal Empire, just the circumstances will be much different than what happened, and he won’t have been the only one to do so. And that could be very fun.
4: Spike will be the same size the entire time, but I will consider a visit to her parents.
Comment posted by marinus18 deleted Aug 16th, 2019
Spike closed his eyes, letting out heavy breaths from his anger, finally having had enough of what was going on. But before he could say anything...
If you shift perspective from Spike to a universal one you need a new paragraph. If you don't want to do that you can keep it in Spike's perspective such as "He just could barely contain his frustration....". These things would be going through his mind as with his strength just him putting force on a child's toy would be enough to break it.
“I’m sorry I have to do this, sweetie. But I don’t want you to be a bad dragon when you get older.” To Spike’s absolute horror, Twilight took a paddle out of the bag.
I don't know if Twilight would really do something like that so easily. It feels a little forced. Maybe you could make it feel more natural by having Spike snap at her. After all he just accidentally broke the toy in anger so he is plenty agitated. That would make Twilight's reaction feel more natural and justified.
Using her magic, Twilight undid the onesie’s flap, and pulled Spike’s diaper down, exposing his purple scaly butt to the crowd. One of them spoke up. “Princess Twilight, do you really need to use a paddle on the little guy?” Twilight looked at the pony, and explained. “I spanked Spike with my hoof a week ago when he burned one of Rarity’s dresses, and he didn’t feel a thing because of his scales. This is the only way to properly discipline him like this.” While this was going on, Spike was thrashing in place, trying his hardest to escape from her lap, but her magic kept him there.
It's a little awkward with Spike's behavior being mentioned retroactively. You would do better mentioning it before the conversation so that the reader will imagine him thrashing while they read it.
9737744
Here some more suggestions:
1. Rarity forced Spike to wear small cute outfits for little girls something like
here and here except the skirts are very short for his size and they don't go down to his hips which expose his crotch and rear for all to see.
2. And while Spike is being babysit by Ember and the other dragons in the Dragonlands Spike does not wear any diaper due to baby Dragons in the Dragonlands do not wear diapers. But that also means that Spike be completely naked while his junk is hanging out completely in the open which will leads to some uncomfortable and suggestive situations like Garble having Spike ride on his shoulders his huge Dragon junk bounces and being press in the back of Garble's head.
3. Twilight take Spike to the School of Friendship and they bump into the Students Six. While Twilight busy at the school she have the Students Six watch Spike while she works so they show Spike around the school to show how important his "mommy's" works is for everycreature at the school then they take him to the school's grounds so they can play and while playing some inappropriate and suggestive shenanigans happen due to Spike really being a teenage Dragon but they're unable to see that.
4. Mrs. Cup Cake force-feed Spike her breast milk directly from her breast like a baby when she run out of milk to feed Spike with.
That all of my suggestions for now.
1. twilight get spell/pill so she produce milk in breast can breastfeed him.
2. be fun if few pony won't effect by discord magic say like rarity or kids so they still make joke at him wear diaper as teenager.
3. take spike to crystal empire to have playdate with furry heart and he still seen as hero by a diaper dragon hero baby. while twilight get distracted by guard. spike could expire a few up and down while wear the diaper.
like use the diaper as way carry gems in the diaper as bag.
4. spike could wake a differ size, or twilight could take vist it her parents.
lot more
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1 and 2: Again, that’s now planned, but thank you for the extra detail.
3: Don’t really have a good understanding about them and their personalities aside from Gallus and Smolder. And not really interested in trying to write down Yona’s speech pattern. (Also meaning, as much as I love her, Zecora will not be appearing in anything I write anytime soon) But I’m willing to give it a go for that scenario, could be fun.
4: I’ll answer this one with a similar one below.
9739391
I’m aware of that, which is why I’m asking for suggestions. Could you tell me what I could put down to make the story go smoother? Would help out and I am willing to listen to ideas.
9739398
1: I am interested fully in making Spike breastfeed, I’m just not entirely sure how to write those scenes.
2: I’m actually making a thing that will explain what the spell Discord cast actually does in detail, that will be among what’s talked about.
3: Yeah, I’ll give the “Baby Hero” a break and let him still have saved the Crystal Empire, just the circumstances will be much different than what happened, and he won’t have been the only one to do so. And that could be very fun.
4: Spike will be the same size the entire time, but I will consider a visit to her parents.
If you shift perspective from Spike to a universal one you need a new paragraph. If you don't want to do that you can keep it in Spike's perspective such as "He just could barely contain his frustration....". These things would be going through his mind as with his strength just him putting force on a child's toy would be enough to break it.
I don't know if Twilight would really do something like that so easily. It feels a little forced. Maybe you could make it feel more natural by having Spike snap at her. After all he just accidentally broke the toy in anger so he is plenty agitated. That would make Twilight's reaction feel more natural and justified.
It's a little awkward with Spike's behavior being mentioned retroactively. You would do better mentioning it before the conversation so that the reader will imagine him thrashing while they read it.