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It all starts with pink smoke. Sunburst and Starlight have crushes on each other. It's obvious. But both of them would die before they admitted their feelings. All the ponies who ship them are waiting for them to confess, but it just isn't happening. Is it really better to just keep it in forever? No seriously, is it?
(ok guys I'm terrible at stories so if I do something wrong or cringy, not just in the story itself, please tell me)

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The only complaint I have is that it's a bit rush, pulling that out, it looks pretty good for now

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Thanks, I'll keep that in mind when writing the other chapters

Yooooo! This is good!

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