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It was a normal day when she found out. But things stopped being normal soon after. When a misunderstanding sends Sweetie Belle fleeing from Ponyville, she meets a mysterious roboticist whose motives and goals are not what they seem. Torn between finding out who she really is and a need to save those she cares for, Sweetie Belle is dragged deeper and deeper into his scheming, and has to escape before it's too late.
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Thanks!
The story is a bit fast pace for my taste.
My reasoning is because when Sweetie belle eye got hit by the firework, suddenly everything became a blur and I didn't get to see the reaction of the others discovery. Also, how did they just realized that she was a robot and not "something weird that's going on."
Anyway , good read and i'm looking for more.
good luck
Whoa, slow down please.
I got lots of questions but i'm out time for now.
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It's meant to be fast, but it sounds like I've got some editing in my future. Thanks for the feedback!
Really rainbow really
So the mechanical one is named Sweetie Belle by the one made of flesh and blood is named Sweetie Bot
there's something to be said about that XD
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I felt like going the different route cuz I could. The fact that there are two Sweeties comes from the specific comment that inspired this fic, so I had to distinguish them somehow.
Had to read it twice before it made sense... Definitely some editing in your future
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What specifically? So I can focus my efforts. I've already got some edits planned, but any pointers would be helpful.
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Maybe you could explain that Machinations was controlling Sweetie Belle before she destroys Ponyville and maybe also refer to the non-robot Sweetie Belle by another name
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For the first, I'll make it more clear. The second is something I know is an issue, but I choose to leave unresolved so it can be part of the ending. Don't worry, I'm acutely aware of the issue, and it was a pain to write.
Wow!!!! Honestly just WOW!! By Luna's moon! That has got to be one of the best stories I've ever read.
I loved how you wrote each act, that was a really good touch. I love how you make the reader actually pause to wonder "Just who's to say that the robot is or isn't the real Sweetie Belle?" because let's face it... Shouldn't that be for the ponies who know her to decide. And who knows Sweetie Belle better than other 2/3 of the CMC?
Really, truly amazing work. I give 3125 out of 5 stars (that's 55 because that's just how good it is).